You are SO good at writing! Keep up the great work!

Woah! They’re a bit young for that, don’t you think? Still, this was pretty cute! A little fast, but cute!

Yeah, CoyoteRom has me digging the ship too

The last thing was the best️️

Wow it's so cool and cute

I BLOODY FREAKIN LOVED THIS! Keep up the good work. -V

I absolutely love this fan fiction, it's so beautiful, keep up the good work.

Luan's worries about how her family would react about her and Maggie being an item not only hits me in the feels, but it's realistic as well in regards to real life struggles of that nature that people have.

I loved how Luan referenced NSL in regards to how she and the others treated Lincoln, and how she (Luan) regretted her part in that whole mess. Luan fearing her family would shun her like how they shunned Lincoln also shows some degree of sympathy.

The concern that the other Louds showed for Luan when she got home further cemented how I'm confident that they'll accept Luan going out with Maggie. Also, the talk between Luan and Luna was a nice touch; Luna can talk to Luan about that subject while speaking from personal experience on the matter. Also, props on Luna (and the rest of the Louds) ALSO regretting what they did to Lincoln in NSL.

Luna being accepted by Sam was a nice touch, BTW.

The way that the rest of the Louds accepted Luan and Maggie (plus Luna and Sam) was just all the more proof on how the Louds are an accepting lot. Got me in the feels again.

I got a chuckle out of Lynn Sr. trying to do the whole 'Overprotective Dad' bit during Luan properly introducing Maggie to everyone.

The epilogue, while it caught me by surprise a little, was a very nice way to wrap things up. Also, the part with Luna telling them she was still there got another chuckle out of me.

Overall, this was one of the finest Luan/Maggie stories I've seen to date. GG, man.

The denial Luan displayed at the beginning was logical, given that she's just realizing said feelings. The reference to Hugh really helped to sell Luan's feelings of struggle.

Luan and Maggie's time at 'Rhyme or Seasoning' further helped to bring across the message of Luan struggling to come to terms with how she is feeling.

What really sold this chapter for me was the end part, when Luan and Maggie officially became an item. I hope that things will work out for Luan and Maggie; Luan especially, given what she's gone through in the story thus far.

...I could potentially see Leni mistaking Maggie for a taller Lucy in the series proper. Also, I liked how quickly Lucy took a shine to Maggie, due to their similar nature as Goths.

It was cute how Luan ran some jokes by Maggie and got some laughs out of her as a result. Also, props on Maggie telling her own joke that got Luan laughing.

The talk between Luna and Maggie came off (to me, at least) as supportive and understanding. You could not have picked a better Loud sibling to have that talk with Maggie, BTW.

It was sweet that the Loud siblings all got a shot at interacting with Maggie; that gives me confidence that Maggie will be accepted by the Louds. Also, Luan's realization at the end helped to really sell any sense of drama/struggle.

I thought it was pretty funny how, in the beginning, one kid actually ATE his pencil out of sheer boredom. It's little things like that which helps get me to enjoy the story as a whole.

I saw what Maggie said about luck. A possible quip at NSL?

I liked how Maggie was there for Luan after Benny let her (Luan) down. However, what really sold me on that part was how gently Benny let Luan down; call me crazy, but I think that Benny being gentle in letting Luan down is part of how Luan was able to bounce back as quickly as she did.

With how concerned Luan's siblings were upon hearing that Benny said 'no', along with how they seem to be taking action in preparation for Luan's soon-to-be guest, it's clear that the Loud siblings care for one another, and that they show it in ways other than ducking, dodging, pushing and shoving.

the epilogue was the funiest thing ive ever read good job

This is my fave ship
10 stars

I actually liked this story quite a bit. It was a fun read. :)

Freaking adorable and I just loved it!