Reviews for The time Portal
fvdv123 chapter 6 . 7h
great story more plz
Guest chapter 6 . 5/29
Good start, then goes to the trash bin. Too many women plus the mayor stupidity of making Hermione the leading lesbiana as Fleur with vela power been a Moron in the presence of Hermione. At the end a suckered end. If you plan and end and it won't fit on 7 chapters add one more. But no you have to make crap end to fit the 6 chapters really stupid.
old-crow chapter 6 . 10/6/2019
Hi,

Thanks for telling a fun story.

cheers

old-crow
starie78 chapter 6 . 10/2/2019
Absolutely brilliant!
serialkeller chapter 6 . 9/30/2019
Amazing story, thanks for writing :D
torlan2003 chapter 6 . 3/12/2019
Great story, smart elves love it. Thank you for writing.
Potterlord9999 chapter 6 . 6/2/2018
This one was great, I'm happy Tonks lived, but there are many errors in grammar, punctuation and spelling and is this the total end? It doesn't say 'complete' on the status thing.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2018
shit
Corwyn chapter 6 . 2/10/2018
I loved this story! Thank you so very much for sharing it with us.
hunzbookwyrm chapter 6 . 12/22/2017
Great story loved it from beginning to end.
BMS chapter 6 . 9/8/2017
Good story though the last chapter seemed a little rushed.
AzureSoulReaper chapter 6 . 8/27/2017
great story
AzureSoulReaper chapter 5 . 8/27/2017
dam fools
AzureSoulReaper chapter 4 . 8/27/2017
nice meeting
AzureSoulReaper chapter 3 . 8/27/2017
very touching and caring adding and saving more people
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