Great story! you successfully made me cry

i kinda like this.

No, no,no, no, NO! You cannot cancel this story! It's really good, and you just can't stop now!

Hem hem, I think you mean happy christmas.

Every time I read this scene, in every iteration, I cry a little bit because it's such a pure scene. But you did it so well. I loved all the dramatic irony with Saffron and Bianca each knowing parts of the story. Also, some of your lines from Bianca's perspective about Sirius being overdramatic... I loved that.

Wait, so what's the Sirius Lupin story in this? Has Lupin actually been helping Sirius? And why can't Bianca just say something?

Oh my gods I love Cedric but I've been rooting for Bianca/Fred for too long help me! And then there's Draco...why make this so complicated for me!

Ooh, I don't really like how you're portraying the Hufflepuffs as mean. I mean, that's up to you, but I (a Hufflepuff) don't really feel like you're getting the traits right.

Yay! Fred admits his feelings for her! I love it.

I love how you brought Snape and Dumbledore into this one. It makes a lot of sense.

I'm excited for this and to see your plan with Hecate. I also really like what you're doing with Saffron's character in general.

Aww I was so sure you were going to surprise us and give Nico a Hogwarts letter.

Ooh, this one was good. Was this your first battle scene that you wrote fully? I really like it, it was a lot better than my first battle scene.

How does she know the accio spell? Isn't that supposed to be a fourth year spell?

I'm glad you had them go on a separate path from Percy. I'm excited to see where this goes from here!