Reviews for Harry Potter and his Pranksters |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please can you update this fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it I don’t like how people shame it definitely continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is such an embarrassment that I can hardly read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it has promise but might want to have a proof reader |
![]() ![]() ![]() This looks like it has a lot of promise! looking forward to it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww... harry with george and fred . are beautiful! cute ! O.o |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was great, especially for your first! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there. First of all I like your premise for this fic as I am a fan of this pairing. Please don't take this the wrong way but the last couple of lines don't really make sense grammatically. What did he give into? Also you wrote his injuries but what about them? Did you mean to write taking in his injuries? As in observing them? Otherwise it's a good start. Looking forward to reading more, Toniboo. |