Surely there is a challenge feature for such blatant mismarking? He should have to justify taking off marks and should be over-ruled by an independent adjudicator or unanimously by the other judges.

Hi! I've been binging on your books for nearly an entire week! I'd love it if you updated this book but please don't rush to write something because someone asked you to. Write it on your own account and ignore those who only care about the updates! Thank you for the many awesome books you write!

As hogwarts is 5/6 hours ahead of st lucia the morning classes in st lucia could be viewed by the hogwarts students in the afternoon and early evening. Why would the staff have to put on special classes?

don't care about the votes. write with your hearts content. Your story is really good. I love Harry/Luna fic and love Luna most. She is such a gentle and sweet character in hp world. Happy writing.

I loved what you did with this version of events. I miss the Horntail, but love that you knew to put his Parslemouth ability in since dragons are just huge snakes. I did enjoy the water task which does match up with the egg. But Harry may not react well to who they take, either Snape himself or Luna.

Not sure if some else commented, but I found a few small mistakes. First, another girl asked Ale to the dance at breakfast where he says in response to “lay off the spinach” then when they arrive at Hogmead a different girl states that he can go with her. Then right as Harry is asking where Luna is at dinner after the Hogsmead trip, he wondered if Luna would like to attend the “Samhain” ritual they would be doing on Christmas morning.

Love this sequel so far otherwise!

Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next

Good chapter again. I say: make the story your own and make up a new task.
Just update soon :p

Great chapter as always. Now onto reading the next one!

please continue

Enjoying this thoroughly, cant wait for the next chapter!

This and the first part are just brilliant! I can't wait to see the other changes to the tasks and the rest of the future. I really appreciate a mature mindset's reading of canon as is reflected in your stories, as opposed to "Marauder's rule!" or "Dragons-goblins-merpeople-Slytherins-muggles, professors, etc. don't really matter." both of which I see a lot on this site. I love what Snape has done for Harry's character and vice versa. Your OCs shine. I love the little moments of domesticity- meals, homework, conversations- that feel very honest and real.

I enjoy your story very much and have just caught up with it. However, I couldn’t help but notice that the way you explain the character reasoning is a bit awkward sometimes, not flowing very well. I think it was better in the first part of the first book of this series, though that could just be my memory being silly. You also sometimes make grammatical or vocabular (is that a word?) mistakes. Still, all in all one of the stories I find most enjoyable.

Thank you for updating this story, I just happened to check and see if you had added any more chapters last night and was excited to see that you had. I hope you keep writing, this is one of my favorites for a while I thought you had quit writing it, look forward to reading more.

Fixing past mistakes and growing legacy are literally the best fanfics ive read and I just really want to say thank you for getting rid of hinny I defo prefer luna and harry but yeah I love this so much. :)