Darn... There goes my newest favorite story, it's hard asf to find a decent x-over when you read nearly all the good ones...

75% of ch 7 was taken straight out of halo 4

This story is too much bias

i loved this story it was so awesome i honestly couldnt see a single flaw in it its sad you stoped but if you didn't feal like continueing i atleast understand i just hope that one day if you feal like it you remake this becues it was awesome and i love storys like this

reza0807 I just want to say that your story was very enjoyable to read and that I am sad that you lost the will to continue. As a new writer myself, I understand the feeling that you believe that your work is not good enough. Also here is some advice, ignore the reviews from people that berate you and your story. Reviews are suppose to give authors constructive criticism not bully them to change your story to fit their own desires. I would encourage you to pick up this story once more but plan where you want to take this story with defined goals. For example, you could have the Rebel Alliance change the tide of war in the Milky way Galaxy for the UNSC then use Star Wars The Last Jedi to bring this story to a proper ending. This does not mean that you can't added your own twists to the plot since this is an alternate universe. I hope this helps and look forward to reading more of your work.

Respectfully,
CJH2099

Thats...very sad.

I think your a great writer!" _

It’s so sad that you aren’t writing this anymore. I really enjoyed it as it was a great story.

I know that this fanfiction is done, but I'm curious how hyperplanes are stable in the space between the two galaxies. From what I can remember the hyperplanes there are very unstable meaning that it's going to be difficult for continuous use of the hyperdrive. I understand that they could have stopped and let it cool, but even then it would take years for the trip to be finished.

I see that nobody from ustedewbsabe something about halo and they are just some fucking Star Wars fans, to start if you put the UNSC after the war and as I am reading just so that it can reach harverst at least 10 or 15 must have passed years as a minimum, so by this time the UNSC fleet must be more than recovered and more if we take into account all the worlds and rings that have been found and all the forrunner technology and precursor in them the UNSC would have much more power . Just to make it easy, UNSC INFINITY has a forerunner engine and they were milk on the space trip and not only that the shields of this ship are antimatter, I think everyone knows how that works but for those who do not antimatter when they come into contact with normal matter, they cancel each other out, another unsc fighters have shields and spit bullets the size of one arm, and it was only in the war against the covenant pact, another mac cannons were able to get through the shields of the Covenant ships and these shields were not any according to stretches. Covenant shields could allow a ship to enter a black hole without suffering any damage, now let's talk about the mac pipes built after the war and these have Covenant technology which makes some shoot a slug surrounded by plasma that they think will plow that a poor shield .

I'm gonna miss this story. Kinda depressing to know that your shutting it down, despite how good it was, especially not being able to see the eventual alliance between the Rebellion and UEG.

The republic create 6 million troops and were almost bankrupt, The empire is soo buffed is not even funny, get youre facts straigth.

Literally nothing you mentioned about the UNSC in your opening post would permit them to defeat the Galactic Empire, let alone one using EU/Legends for inspiration. Not even a Disney Calc Galactic Empire would lose to the UNSC, and that version would at least give the UNSC a little nominal firepower advantage! Extreme Industrial capacity, territorial extent, and REALLY extreme POPULATION advantage are all so squarely in the Galactic's Empire's failure that the UNSC doesn't even come within a half of a percentage point. Not to mention a larger navy and military force because of this with faster overall FTL that's so blisteringly fast that once they get a hold of UNSC territory and map out routes there, the empire could literally wage an offensive hitting every single important UNSC world at once cripple their capacity to wage war so hard that it'd make what the Covenant did in gutting their infrastructure look tame by comparison. Compared to all that, 'MAC's', 'Ai', 'Spartans,' and 'well trained soldiers' are THE DEFINITION of confusing frivolities and soft advantages with actual, hard advantages... especially when you consider the Empire has it's OWN soft advantages that counter half of the soft advantages you mentioned of the UNSC. Spartans? Try the force, nimrod. We saw what happens to a Spartan when he encounters telekinesis, and it ain't pretty, especially when you consider Vader is leading the charge personally and his displayed TK is greater than what we saw from the Didact? 'Well trained soldiers?' The Galactic Empire has PLENTY of those too, and more so even considering the Galactic Military numbers more than the population of the entire UNSC, ESPECIALLY if you're gonna draw from Legends/EU! A legit fight between the Galactic Empire and the UNSC wouldn't even be like a fight between the US and your own country of Belgium, but a fight between Mainland China and some rando mid-western town numbering at about a population of 12,000! XD

Cole Protocol

This was one of my favoite fic's to read but as a fellow writer (Who also doesn't do outline too often) I totally get it. Writing shouldn't feel like a job, you should do what makes you feel happy. You can always look back at this and see the improvement's you made and the knowledge you earned. Thank you for the adventure and have a fun time on your next adventure!