To be honest that was not the ending I was expecting but I'm glad nevertheless. Who'd though that Kokoro would wind up with my girl Nyo despite the rather inauspicious nature of their courtship.

Of course that's putting it mildly considering Nyo out and out ravaged the shy geisha without any regard for her feelings. If you were to tell me that Kokoro would choose to be with Nyo after the way their first encounter went down then I would've called you stark raving mad.

Too bad the author couldn't fit in a scene where Kokoro confronted Kasumi about her extra-curricular activities and read her the riot act. Then again that would've made the chapter unnecessarily long and not enough time would've been given to payoff scene with Koko and Nyo consummating their love for one another with the awesome "money shot" at the end.

I've read other stories with Nyo being the leader of a Harem, enslaving the other DOA girls to her will and lascivious desires. But with this one I was glad that Nyo was given a single paramour to which she can shower all her love and affection upon. Let it never be said that the Tengu race are not affectionate and caring when the mood strikes them.

Like I said I like the Nyo Harem stories but those where Nyo focuses her energies on a most deserving soul also peak my interests as well. Hopefully other authors will take a cue from Yuri and Jojo and show Nyo in a light that most of her fans have never seen from her before: that of a monogamous being whose willing to shower one person all with the love in world.

So until next time this is SV33 of the U.S.S. Perversion signing off!

Well, well, my friends~

Ohhhh wow~ *O* Oh yes. Yesss~

Mmhmm! Dayum, this was so beautiful, so heartbreaking at the start and then, oh so beautiful, romantic and uber~sexy right afterwards! *O*

Kokoro finding solace in Nyo-sama's arms and bosom, crying her heart out as she reveals what she saw Kasumi doing, and then realizing that she's better off with Nyo-sama...wow~ Oh man that tugged at the heart strings so hard. T_T

But then...ohhh hoooh *then!* Oh dayum~! Dat comforting acceptance, passion, romance and lovemaking~ Oh dayum that was so~romantic and hot and sexy...*especially~!* those absolutely fantastic, exquisite lingerie outfits that Kokoro and Nyo-sama put on. Ohhhh dayum. :'3

Overall, this was a fantastic tale of love, romance, passion, betrayal and acceptance~ I love it.

Mission Complete! Outstanding work, you two~!

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Great story my buddy nicely detailed!

I love the ending of this story. I would love to hear more about Nyo and Kokoro's love story they are a very sexy couple.

Ah Nyo you naughty little minx! What will I do with you? Is your sexual appetite so insatiable that you have to violate the innocent little geisha in training?

Oh and just so you know, breaking into somebody's home is a felony. You're lucky nobody was there with Kokoro at the time otherwise you'll be looking at some serious time in the pokie.

Loved how my girl Nyo seduced the shy Kokoro into doing any and everything she wanted to. I would just kill to see the outfits those two were wearing: knowing the author he probably got inspired by one of the Victoria's Secret catalogs that they send out regularly.

One thing you can be sure of is a quality sex scene involving the immortal mistress of desire, and boy howdy did she ever bring the heat. When Nyo gets on a roll there's no force on Earth that can stop her until she gets her fill. Though she was hesitant at first she found herself enjoying every bit of the pleasure Nyotengu was giving her.

That bombshell at the end of the story had reeling something fierce. Who'd thought that sweet, innocent Kasumi would be three timing Kokoro with not one but TWO girls. That little plot twist along promises to make this story that much more interesting. I only hope the next chapter will be just as steamy (if not more) as this one was.

So until next time, this is SV33 of the U.S.S. Perversion signing off!

Well, well, my friends~

Ohhh this was absolutely exquisite~! *O*

This was as beautiful and sexy as it was raunchy, dirty, oh so very immoral and soooo~wrong in sooo~many ways, but I can't get enough of it~ Oh my God, ohhh the rampant NTR~ *O*

Kokoro...Kokoro, oh poor Heart-chan, poor Koko-chan...oh the poor dear~ First off, she becomes Nyo-sama's pet...and *then*, ohhh and THEN, she comes across *this?!* Oh my God! Oh wow, this is...oh wow. *O* This is such an intricately woven web of intrigue, infidelity and pleasure~ Oh my God. *O*

And ohhhh my God, oh *wow* that scene at Kokoro's very own home...oh my God. :'3 Nyo-sama and her darling, beloved Koko-chan looked absolutely *exquisite* in their incredible lingerie outfits, and oh my God, oh wow dat mouth Nyo-sama has~ Oh wow, she's got the magic touch, oh yes, yesh she so! does! *O*

This is amazing, you two~ :'3 Keep it up! I *must* know what happens next soon! *O*
Update ASAP! That's an order!

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Can't wait for chapter 3 my buddy!

I am loving this story so far. I can't wait until I get a notification for chapter three!

My gawd... Nyo is being so naughty as always. You just love turning her into a nasty little succubus, dontcha ;P

And as always, her victim is a sweet innocent maiden. Poor ol Kokoro, such a delicate little flower getting defiled by the sexy Nyo. And what's worse, she LIKES it O_O

That's what makes Nyo so bad: she does stuff to you against your will and then you come back for seconds xP

well yuri ntr isnt it... pretty sexy tho.. the lemon isnt as hot as i expected.. keep it up..

If we get more out of this, I wouldn't mind seeing Kasumi get in on the action.

No rest for the sexily wicked, huh? This is more proof that when Nyotengu sets her sets on something she pretty much gets what she wants.

Now I don't want to be that guy who interjects logic in a plotline that's mostly made up of smut but damn Kokoro is dense like a mother. Didn't her parents ever told her not to let in strangers in the middle of the night. Luckily for the young geisha Nyo just wanted a piece of that sweet potato pie, otherwise Kokoro would've wound up on the wrong side of a negative statistic.

It's funny to me how Kokoro was at first protesting being turned into a sex toy by the naughty tengu vixen but not one time did she put up a real fight to break away. Hell she didn't even bother to tell her girlfriend Kasumi about the sexual encounter between her and the demoness of lust. One has to wonder what Kasumi would say if found out about the tryst.

One thing I have to wonder is if Nyo had sort of pervasive influence on Honoka and Marie Rose to make them do her bidding. I can't help but to wonder if Nyo had her way with the two before rocking Kokoro's world again? Be that as it may you can add another notch in Nyo's belt of sexual conquests.

In closing I really enjoyed this story for what it was: a sensual encounter between two girls of the DOA Universe. As long as can ignore the lack of common sense from the shy and formerly introverted Kokoro then you'll have yourself a grand ole time reading this story.

So until next time this is SV33 of the U.S.S. Perversion signing off!

Well, well, Li'l Lily~

HOO-RRAH! 1st Review EVAR, Btches~!

Haaah~ This was...oh damn~ Mmhmm.

This was beautifully ~wrong. Kokoro, oh Kokoro, li'l Heart-chan~ She should have known better than to just let in a stranger. (Gives an Evil Grin) Just...mmhmm. So delightfully wrong and bittersweet, this first chapter.

I feel so~ bad for Kokoro and especially Kasumi, but...ohhh Nyo-sama. *O* Oh man! Nyo-sama just...she's relentless. She knows exactly what she wants and she just goes~ for it, she goes~ for Kokoro...and Nyo-sama will simply not be denied~! *O*

Kokoro gave in beautifully. Yes. Such passion and love and heat and pleasure~ Mmmhmm.

This is gonna be fun~! (Licks his lips) Hell, it already is.

Mission Start!

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