did i miss something?! why noir called rose?!

Don't think Ann is wrong to be upset, but i dunno, it's a bit hypocritical to say "i care about this person and told her about the thieves despite the problems it could cause down the line, but you cant do the same".

Forcing him to come to terms that she's a problem that needs to be dealt with one way or another, i like. Forcing an ultimatum on him, i don't like at all. Granted, she's emotional, but man.

Too much angst in this story man, some of it needs to let up.

This is giving me anxiety.

This is really good chapter and the a/n is really long to read (sorry about it - I can't read long a/n).

Loving the story so far, and i love what youve done to the wardens. To be fair to them though, they're meant to be irritating. The room presents itself as the guest views the world, and Akira views the world as a terrible jail.

Still, i think turning em into horrors definitely fits the feel of the story so far.

What an opening chapter! Well done. Forget how the rest of the story turns out, opening chapters like this are what keep me dredging through the muck that is this website. Very excited to keep reading.

Another awesome chapter! I really enjoyed the way you broke the usual format for Futaba’s scene, it definitely showcased all of the inner workings of what she deals with. Keep up the great work!

Can I just say the Sae deduction scene was crazyyyyy.

Like, even thinking about trying to write something like that gives me a headache.

You're super amazing for being able to pull that off, even if it went through four drafts.

Love the story. Hope you're in good health!

I read the Anthology comic before reading this chapter. I thought of Morgana, Joker, and Futaba's reaction to the name and had a good laugh.

I literally binged this story in a 10 hour reading session. I know your probably very busy, but please continue! This story is legitimately well written and has very good Character arcs,(Plus hopefully Makoto actually finally joins the PT’s soon)

From a Satisfied Reader!

This was a real gem that tvtropes recommended for me. I love what you've done with the characters, and I went through this faster than I thought I could with an almost 500,000 word fic. I'm eagerly awaiting more!

I never thought of something happening between Tae and Iwai but man can I see it now.

Wellp. I loved this story at the start, I really did. Your characterisation was strong, your pacing was great, the humor was on point. But somewhere around chapter 50 or so you just seemed to go off the rails with the liberties you were taking with the plot and the characters, and I just lost the enjoyment I felt. The pacing tanked, as well, and for the last ten or so chapters not much has been happening, and now that it is happening again I find myself not really caring. You’ve overplayed the teenage melodrama card, too; yes I can see Akira behaving the way he did at the beginning, but over 70 chapters he has barely developed at all.
Thank you for writing this story. I have been entertained by it, make no mistake, but I choose to opt out now, before things get worse. One writer to another, I strongly urge you to re-examine your plans for this story and perhaps adjust them accordingly.
Please don’t take this review as mean spirited. I truly did enjoy the early half of this work, and you have some not inconsiderable skill as a writer. I am merely offering my honest opinion, and I hope you find something helpful in it. Thank you again for taking the time to write this story

So I just wanna say how much I’ve loved this story so far. You have taken something that is already gritty, great, and lovable. And made it ten times better. You’ve added more story, character development and problems for P5 and I absolutely love it. So thank you so far for this emotional roller coaster. Ps. Ryuji! Get it through your thick skull that Ann is thirsty for you brother! Come on! Or maybe I’m just reading the situation wrong. But I’m going with the with the one where Ann actually wants Ryuji. Which I hope is the case. Anyway I’m done. Bye.

finally catch up. darn... all this bone from the past

and Kaneshiro now set his eyes on Makoto ... shiet