Hello Negaifreak, I really love the story, and it might be one of your best non-adaptation story's yet. I love how you handle Sunsets PTSD that even though she is not through it she when from i will deal with it my self to i can now at least talk to her friend, I loved the tease that something bigger is coming to the future, but the only thing that felt weird is that Aggregor manage to understand some abilities like the sharigan or ability’s you need to train to obtain them, but that me nitpicking on the story to be honest.

Hello I really love the story, I love how you handle Sunsets ptsd that even though she is not through it she can now at least talk to her friend, I loved the tease that something bigger is coming to the future, but the only thing that dealt weir is that Aggregor manage to understand some abilities like the sharigan or ability’s you need to train to obtain them, but that me nitpicking

No offence but I think sunset shouldnt have gotten over her ptsd in just one story. She was mutilated by kizaru and betrayed by rook. So I think you should try and hint that she still isn't over it. I also think her argument that she's suffered more then the others is wrong but from what I could gather that's what you were going for which is good. And finally I think you should give us some more insight into the Kronos alliance because they are very interesting together and due to the way you write your eon I would like to see their interactions like agnoliga(evil dragon guy) and blackbeard being evil together or eon and lysandre going full fanatic freindship when they first met and finally if each villain has people from their universe working with them I'd like to see you put doflamingo(my favourite one piece villain) on the alliance in some way

This was a great story, dude. And that ending really hyped everyone up as we're getting closer to the "endgame" of your series. *wink wink*

Loved this story from beginning to end. May the andromeda aliens rest in peace. Also good luck with exams.

I always wanted Sunset to become an alicorn canonically. Thanks for granting my wish via fanfic form :) All in all, this was another great story, and with the reveal of the Space Infinity Stone, the plot thickens. Question: Is this the first time an Infinity Stone appeared in one of your stories, or was there another time but I missed it?

PS, I saw the Sunset VS Smoothie short and I loved it! It was even better than I had imagined and that was a really clever way Sunset exploited Smoothie's weakness.

And so another story for the "Omni Force" title series is concluded. It's been quite an experience reading, glad to see Sunset's physical scars are healed and she got her eye back (though it does beg the question why Ben didn't use Alien X to heal her before) hope the Andromeda aliens get statues built in honor of their sacrifices, and it's cool that Sunset finally got her wings. So totally earned them after everything she's been through. And was that the Space Stone that Xalia had at the end? Now we look forward to your next updates for The Challenge of a Lifetime and RWBY: Omni Force.

PS, since you'll be studying for exams (good luck for those btw) I can assume you won't be updating for a while until like late January or February, which is good because from the 17th, my family will be visiting a country which has been dealing with a crap-ton of loadshedding lately. Which means I'm pretty much gonna spend 3 weeks deprived of electricity and internet, meaning it'll be hard to review whatever updates you might've made then. But anyways, good luck again and hope you and your family have a happy new year.

Not gonna lie, the permanent deaths of the Andromeda aliens is a pretty huge kick to the balls, but at least they were avenged so it's not so bad. Glad that Sunset and the others pulled through in the end and like an angel, she earned her wings and I was going to ask why this story was called "Omni Force: Guardians" in the first place. Glad it was cleared up with the Celestia part in the end.

By the way, the part with "narrowing her eyes onto the shining gem in her hands." That was totally an infinity stone, wasn't it?

When that celestialsapien erased Aggregor out of existence, it reminded me of how Beerus did the same thing to Zamosu (sorry if I misspelled the name) in dragon ball super. And that got me thinking, can a celestialsapien rival the omni king grand Zeno?

You know that male celestialsapien was right. What he did to Aggregor was merciful. They all easily could've condemned him to eons worth of torture as punishment for his crimes, but instead gave him a quick and (I think) painless death. So he should be grateful for that much.

And I see Sunset got her other eye back. A bonus :)

*Squadron 2 are all cheering and celebrating their victory, exchanging pats on the back for a job well done*

Jojo knd: Yeah, way to go guys! *slowly backs up towards a door* I totally knew you could do it! Never doubted you for a second! *Lights up a stick of TNT, opens door and tosses it into room full of 10 wooden coffins, each with a 2nd squadron member's name carved into it. Closes door and plugs fingers into ears.*

(BOOM!)

*Sunset and the others are startled by explosion and turn towards Jojo knd*

Star: What the heck was that?!

Jojo knd: Oh, nothing that warrants concern *walks away while whistling innocently*

*2nd squadron exchange confused glances and shrugs*

You have no idea how long we've waited to see the conclusion of this story. As usually the fight against Aggregor was well written, the teamwork between the heroes was well executed, Sunset's fight against the Celestialsapien-Aggregor was awesome too, and I can think of no better punishment for Aggregor than ridding the multiverse of his existence once and for all. And I'm sure the Andromeda galaxy aliens will be brought back in the final chapter. Also like the names you gave for the celestialsapian personalities and the mother. How did you come up with them?

So if Aggregor was gonna get a death sentence, what was going on between now and years ago back when Ben was a teenager after he was defeated by Kevin?

They should've let Sasuke kill Aggregor when he had the chance. A lot of people are divided on the topic on whether or not certain bad guys deserve to die. Yes killing every villain is bad, but letting the worst of them only be sentenced to life imprisonment is also bad. It's true a hero shouldn't just resort to killing the villain as death begets death; but in truth, the moral code that the heroes follow is flawed for it is meant for idealistic world of black and white, ignoring the grey. Not all villains should die, but sometimes dark actions must sometimes be taken in order to do what's right in the long run.

Take Batman and the Joker for example. Heroes living by this code ultimately gets people hurt or even killed when the villain (having no intention to change his ways) gets out of jail, it’s more selfish thinking about your own moral code rather than innocent lives in the future. Anyways this is just my personal statement and I urge you to take it with a grain of salt, especially for your future fanfics.

(Sees Aggregor as a Celestialsapian)

Okay, not gonna lie... my pants are a little wet right now.

May God be with the Omni Force.