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EvaShinobiKaiserKnight chapter 19 . 6/18 hey I know you hate bad reviews but here it is... divorce is a very touchy subject and you portrayed it realistically so that's a plus. keep writing it's a good fic. |
meyrman358 chapter 19 . 6/13 I like Sarada so much in this fic! I mean, I find her adorable! NaruSaku loved each other and this is bitter truththeir development was nice |
marionette16 chapter 6 . 6/12 I'm sorry that u have to deal with such a bullshit of comments. I mean if they dont like it, they should just leave! What a bunch of insensible morons! Well, in this chapter I did not really like it when Sarada called Hinata a terrible mom, bcs Sarada would never address that in the canon imo I dont think Hinata was a terrible of mom, i think she is still in the 'ok' stage, she's doing pretty well except that she's not very stern to Boruto ( that brat!), and for me (who was born and raised in Asian culture) parents sometimes should be stern to a child, reprimand them for not being polite and respectful to your parents/elders. I dont know who Boruto look up to, but boy, that brat is so out of control, i wonder why Boruto was portrayed as a disrespectful brat when east asian culture early education is usually about respecting your parents and being thoroughly polite (at least that was what my parents teach me whe i was a kid) Anw enough of my rants! Good chapter as always |
marionette16 chapter 4 . 6/11 Okay, Hinata is really confusing here. She still madly in love with naruto, doesnt she? But somehow at the same time she's not. Ok this chapter is interesting! Gotta keep on reading! |
marionette16 chapter 3 . 6/11 The more i read this the more interesting it gets! You truly stay true to the canon characters'personality, its really great! |
marionette16 chapter 2 . 6/11 Sarada is such a sensible kid! Although i dont agree with the main series pairing, but i got a soft spot for this little girl. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9 i love |
UzuNamikaze chapter 19 . 5/21 keep up the good work |
UzuNamikaze chapter 15 . 5/18 Great Stuff ... looking forward to how this turns out |
Saint-Taylor chapter 19 . 5/1 This is such a good story! I just started binging it-I hate to say I was reluctant at first, I skirted around reading this initially bc I heavily dislike Boroto Canon but upon reading it I love how you wrote the characters and their relationships. Its weird for me because I went through a really bad divorce with my parents, and to see it portrayed in a fanfic is so rare? And so realistically? All the kudos to you. I can't wait to see where you take this story, and for Sakura and Naruto to come into their own. :) |
Darkblossomlily chapter 4 . 4/24 I love Narusaku this is otp then Naruhina its an 8.5/10 it was forced tbh but love this book so far Keep it up |
Luz chapter 19 . 4/15 I loved this chapter! Once I start reading I cannot stop. I did not see Naruto as the bad guy as you mentioned. He just feels stressed about everything and Boruto isn't an easy son. I feel that if Hinata have really figured it out then she shouldn't be so mad at Naruto, she should just feel really sad. As I said in a previous review I really like that you don't rush things between Naruto and Sakura. I'm Argentinean and this is the type of story I've been looking for. I think you do a great job, and I prefer that you take your time so you give us good material. Keep on it! Cheers! |
Luz chapter 17 . 4/15 Hi! I just love this story, even more than some I've read before! I think your writing skills are very good, really! And I really like that you don't rush things between Naruto and Sakura. You focus on the details. You are doing a great job, keep on it! |
LumiaTenshi chapter 19 . 4/13 I'm glad Sakura divorced Sasuke in this story, she easily overcame emotional stress after that divorce, and that Hinata and Naruto divorced is truly for the better based on their emotional situation. Good for the kids that they're able to talk about their parents divorce, it's actually healthy but hopefully they will have some adult to talk to about it even if it isn't a professional or their parents but someone who is really concern about them and their parents (Kakashi *ahem*). Yes! Naruto isn't the bad guy here. No one is. Just bad past decisions. I suggest that he could be more sympathetic by actually continuously being more present in his children's life since he doesn't have to stay too much in the office just to avoid awkward moments with Hinata anymore. That would be the best act he could do, and also not to just jump on the opportunity to be with Sakura but spend more time with Boruto's teammates such as Mitsuki and Sarada, her especially. The biggest way to make him more sympathetic is to actually talk to Sasuke and beat the shit out of him to apologize to Sakura and even to Sarada, make him somehow present in his daughter's life. Of course, the ultimate moment would be a conversation together with Hinata and Sakura and top it with spending time with all their kids together. Thank you for updating! |
FenreldStormblade chapter 19 . 4/13 interesting chapter. I wonder how long it will be before you start wondering on Naruto and Sakura getting together |