Hey. This is on eof my favorites and i dont like alot of them. So yea. I really like this can u plz update. Oh and

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our a great author btw

This is seriously so cute

Amei sua história mesmo muito linda

Oi adorei sua histó

LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE

Just binge-read and very good!

I just wanted to tell you that you are doing a great job with this story. You are brave to have written so many chapters of this story, especially since English is not your first language. I only notice your small mistakes in the way that you phrase a sentence. My daughter and her friend pointed out to me how English is the only language where we write and say sentences backwards. Instead of "She is a woman," they pointed out that the translation from other languages say "Woman she is." I can speak Japanese, but I couldn't even begin to imagine or tell a Hawaii 5-O story in Japanese!

I look forward to your next chapter to read what Steve and Harper are doing. Maybe you could have Harper participate in her first BBQ or picnic with the Ohana.

I love this! Just one random question. Why is Steve driving the Camaro without Danny around? Did they swap cars somewhere and I missed it?

so sweet! 3

Amazing chapter update

LOVE it!

Awwwwww

Sweet!

Amazing chapter update

I am enjoying your story very much. I suspected that English might not be your first language but you are doing an excellent job with it. It is nice to see another side of Steve. I look forward to reading the next chapter.