Thanks for sharing this with us.

I'm looking forward to more.

So sorry, but I can't read this any further. While the concept is intriguing I can't get past how this chapter flips from 3rd person to 1st person sometimes within the same sentence. I noticed it starting to happen and hoped it would be corrected. I usually don't mind writing errors. We are human and lord knows I couldn't do better, but this is almost impossible to get through without losing track of the story. Would love to continue if you go back and fix those problems . I love your other story about the High Court, so this surprised me. Anyway as always, thank you for your efforts it is appreciated.

Such a lovely story! I would love to see a future take or two :)

Thank you so much

Beautifully done.

Aww, isn’t he sweet. That was a perfect surprise for her. Debbie

YES PLEASEE!

Please, please, the reception. How Edward reacts to his parents. Where they will live. Maybe a future-take with kids. Hmmm?
Judy

:) loved this story. I hope you do write more

The reception... living together... maybe an addition to the family... just a thought or two...

I'd ko e to see a reception and a future-take.

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I have been thoroughly enjoying this story. I love that she asked him to marry her before he was able to get his out. Very sweet.

Great start. Looking forward to reading more!