Reviews for The Peregrine
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2018
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SILVERBACK1 chapter 1 . 5/12/2018
hope you update soon
biob1 chapter 4 . 1/16/2018
Interesting
Tsunashi777 chapter 4 . 12/31/2017
Pretty cool work . I sincerely hope Hela will have relationships with Naruto . Of course she has quite enough work considering his dense skull when it comes to affection from opposite sex.

Also , maybe Naruto can actually kill off Mephisto and give his realm to Hela for command ? I think Hela pretty worthy death deity and command afterlife of souls , as she follow strict protocol as Death's representative , thus obviously she won't like demons like Mephisto snatching souls of humans from grasps of death . But Naruto will need help as Mephisto is all powerful in his dimension to point Galactus had a draw with him in clash . Maybe Ghost Rider can be asked for help here .

Also , in case of it being harem . I sincerely ask Illyana Rasputin aka Magik to be part of it .

PLz update your fic soon
headboy419 chapter 4 . 12/14/2017
Good job, keep it up!
Guest chapter 4 . 11/13/2017
Update please
yad2411 chapter 4 . 10/30/2017
awesome story man i am not much in marvle stories but this is really good. Keep up the good work.
Tera12 chapter 4 . 10/30/2017
Great chapter :D Cant wait for more
Tom2011 chapter 4 . 10/29/2017
Interesting.
kirashu chapter 4 . 10/28/2017
I'm glad you didn't give us the flashback in the first chapter, this way, this is more intriguing and interesting. Now i'm both curious about Hela's recovery and her relationship with Naruto (aka his past) and what will happens to Natasha (aka the present). Great move.
Dangulus chapter 4 . 10/28/2017
An interesting story, its well-written and quite well executed. I hope to see you update.
read8x8only chapter 3 . 10/28/2017
yup, great chapter
hela "queen of hell" meet naruto her "king"
read8x8only chapter 4 . 10/28/2017
sorry I'm not finished reading the chapter yet.
later
read8x8only chapter 4 . 10/28/2017
ok
Minato 1 chapter 4 . 10/28/2017
This just keeps on getting more and more interesting. Nice work.
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