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Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2018 PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON |
SILVERBACK1 chapter 1 . 5/12/2018 hope you update soon |
biob1 chapter 4 . 1/16/2018 Interesting |
Tsunashi777 chapter 4 . 12/31/2017 Pretty cool work . I sincerely hope Hela will have relationships with Naruto . Of course she has quite enough work considering his dense skull when it comes to affection from opposite sex. Also , maybe Naruto can actually kill off Mephisto and give his realm to Hela for command ? I think Hela pretty worthy death deity and command afterlife of souls , as she follow strict protocol as Death's representative , thus obviously she won't like demons like Mephisto snatching souls of humans from grasps of death . But Naruto will need help as Mephisto is all powerful in his dimension to point Galactus had a draw with him in clash . Maybe Ghost Rider can be asked for help here . Also , in case of it being harem . I sincerely ask Illyana Rasputin aka Magik to be part of it . PLz update your fic soon |
headboy419 chapter 4 . 12/14/2017 Good job, keep it up! |
Guest chapter 4 . 11/13/2017 Update please |
yad2411 chapter 4 . 10/30/2017 awesome story man i am not much in marvle stories but this is really good. Keep up the good work. |
Tera12 chapter 4 . 10/30/2017 Great chapter :D Cant wait for more |
Tom2011 chapter 4 . 10/29/2017 Interesting. |
kirashu chapter 4 . 10/28/2017 I'm glad you didn't give us the flashback in the first chapter, this way, this is more intriguing and interesting. Now i'm both curious about Hela's recovery and her relationship with Naruto (aka his past) and what will happens to Natasha (aka the present). Great move. |
Dangulus chapter 4 . 10/28/2017 An interesting story, its well-written and quite well executed. I hope to see you update. |
read8x8only chapter 3 . 10/28/2017 yup, great chapter hela "queen of hell" meet naruto her "king" |
read8x8only chapter 4 . 10/28/2017 sorry I'm not finished reading the chapter yet. later |
read8x8only chapter 4 . 10/28/2017 ok |
Minato 1 chapter 4 . 10/28/2017 This just keeps on getting more and more interesting. Nice work. |