I very much enjoyed reading this story, you are a talented writer!

Hehe I'm not sorry her and Jareth are going to be trapped together in a cabin because of a snow storm.

lol Sarah saying she doesn't need to guess at the size of his dick.
Uh oh to the iron poisoning. I do however love the excuse for them to be shut away in an isolated cabin together.

I'm not usually a fan of enemies to lovers however I do like this antagonistic back and forth with them both.
Haha I can't wait to see what snooping Jareth gets up to.

Oh damn I'm loving the fact Sarah is unconsciously drawing scenes and places from the Labyrinth.
The explanation for why Jareth has to take a wished away child is a good detail.

I like that painting Jareth's portrait becomes an impulse that must be satisfied.
A fan of the Labyrinth being sentient creature speaking to both Jareth and Sarah.
oooh! Is Jareth going to have to learn to live like a human?

OMFG deffo one of the best story on here! I know you wrote this a long awhile ago but Bravo! Thanks for sharing a wonderful gift.

Not sure if you see reviews on this story anymore, Scattered Logic, but I binged on this one in one sitting! I love how you gave Jareth vulnerabilities and made him human by taking away his powers-it gave a fresh approach to to the Jareth/Sarah dynamic and made their evolving relationship much more realistic. As old as this story is, I still wanted to express appreciation for you sharing with us, and for keeping this story up for all these years.

Uh, wouldn't Sarah's deepest desire be her family NOT being dead? Just saying...

Hi even though my comment will be 16 years late, I just want to say that this story is a Breath of fresh air from stories where Jareths already in love with Sarah.

Anyway, loved your story! ;)

Przeczytałam , będzie mi bardzo brakować tej powieści, już żałuję że to koniec, pewnie będę do niej wracać co jakiś czas bo jest pochłaniająca , zaabsorbowała moją uwagę całkowicie. S była cudownie naturalna i bezpretensjonalna, J skomplikowany, po raz pierwszy to on był zależny od niej, ona dbała o jego potrzeby a nie na odwrót, był bezradny i zdany na jej pomoc, to odwrócenie ról było niesamowite. Kilkanaście lat po opublikowaniu tego opowiadania nadal jest porywające a ja mogę tylko żałować i pozostawać w rozczarowaniu że już nie piszesz na lff, Twoje opowiadania nadal żyją i zdobywają nowych zachwyconych nimi czytelników, jak Cię przekonać do dalszego pisania i publikowania ?

dobrze się rozpoczyna, oboje są zaskoczeni, co zrobi Jareth bez swojej magii?

I've loved this story for years. Thank you so very much for writing it. Im happy you've left it here for people to read through the years. I enjoyed revisiting it, and will be doing so again in the future. Ty.

Lovely work thank you for sharing xx

Dec23, 2018. Your creations are equal to famous published authors, both living and dead. It am grateful to you for your generous it in sharing your gifts in this forum.

This story has given me so much enjoyment. Thank you.