What does Snape mean 'PRETENDING to go to the third rate school'? Harry IS going to the other school and isn't a registered student of Hogwarts since he turned down enrollment 4 years ago thanks to Snapes snarky attitude back then, so Harry should ask/demand to know exactly WHAT is he 'pretending' when it comes to about the magic school that he IS going to that is false, that makes Snapes think he can not only order him to stop 'pretending' to go to it and go with Snape to detention like he is a student of Hogwarts who Snape can punish?

story is good civ

I'm also really enjoying this story. Your FSN and HP crossovers are a lot of fun. I hope to see more soon.

It might have been mentioned that Snape was just keeping appearances as a spy to make it look like he hated Harry in the same book where dumbledore dies. I do vaguely remember that but it's been a very long time since I've read it

You totally need to work on your spelling of certain words. Other than that it's great

If you would have used archer's hair, I would have asked if you want him to have sword shaped spells. Because that's the most likely result, lol

You should have seen my reaction the moment I saw the word "fox ". I was just yelling "YES! YYEEEEES! FOXY WAIFU GET!"
Let it be known I was at my friends house when I was reading this... I thought it was the best thing I saw all day, and I saw lots of awesome things today. Good job bro

Interesting. Keep up the good work.

This is quite good :)

The plot had potential but it’s too shallow and rushed to be of much quality

I like it, but it's karkaroff, not kirchirov, not much a stickler on grammar, but felt I should point it out.

Harry would never consider Ginny.

Ginerva is now on Harry's black list.

Omake2 made me laugh. Cedric could use a regeneration Draught, for his arm.

I suspect that the Avenger class Servant, third grail war, was a descendant, not the original.