I hope that Phoenix Wright makes a cameo as one of Sae's acquaintances once she becomes a defense attorney.

Liked your take on Akira, and the SaexAkira fluff is so warm and wholesome. Thanks for writing!

This was wonderful. Just what you would expect for when looking for a Sae pairing.
Really liked the fact, that didn't have to re-read any of original game canon events.

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I have yet to play the game, but I think you might have just introduced me to my OTP. Absolutely loved this, thank you for the amazing story! Ehehe.

"Ms." Niijima?
Now, I don't know Japanese in any real depth, but I do know they don't use variations of "Ms", "Mrs" or "Mr" like English and other Latin-based languages like Italian do; they instead use honorific suffixes. Sae should be Sae-san or Niijima-san, since that's the honorific used for adults; Makoto is Makoto-chan (or Mako-chan, as I think Haru uses) or Niijima-chan, since that's the informal honorific used for girls, and Ryuji would be Ryuji-kun or Sakamoto-kun, the informal masculine honorific.

Persona 5 does a pretty good job at using the honorifics, but it does tend to screw up sometimes and use the English titles (like with the teachers at Shujin). Though I am surprised no-one ended up calling Shido "Shido-sama"...

Man, cant say i like this Akira. No offenve to any christians, this is simply not how i imagined Akira by the game. Also him just deciding that he will not change hearts of evil people anymore is just as selfish of a decision as he was about to do before. They are a group, its not just for him to decide and i just dont see people like ryuuji agreeing. Not to mention helping just people with illnesses is going to do them fat load of luck when next crime boss is gonna start kicking peoples teeth in again. Everything in moderation notvjust one over the other because of one thing.
Its very well written tho imo :) thanks for your hard work

Good stuff. Makes me wonder if this is it'd be like to have her as a romance option.

At first I read this I was just like;
"Aw, that was cute"
But the more I think about it, the more I love it! The dynamics of Sai and Akira's relationship, with all the drama that entails.
At first I scratched my head at Akira being made Christian, not knocking on anything as a Christian myself, but then everything of Yaldabaoth, Minoritiship, and overall just gave him so much more depth.
(I don't know if you intended any of this, or if this is just you inserting a small piece of yourself into the "Persona Player Stand In." However it gave me a lot to over analyze, so I would just roll with it ;)
Now I didn't 'cry' but this story DEFINITELY hit me in the feels, so;
It made me laugh, made me cry, and made me awwwwww.
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Greetings. I would like to start this letter by thanking you for both your amazing (albeit slightly short) writing, as well as your time and dedication. Having finished P5 last Friday, I was struck with an incredible bolt of inspiration to both read and write some saucy P5 fanfiction. My search lead me to you, and this story, although I've never really shipped Sae and Akira. This story really did change that, and I saw just how good of a pairing they can be, and I want to let you know that you truly have a talent for writing, and this story itself has inspired me strongly. I would read it in-between classes and at night before sleep, and on some rainier days, it became something I looked forward to, even it was just for a short while. I also feel like I've learned a bit about the craft from reading this as well, so truly, from the bottom of my heart, thank you. I look forward to any future works you may have on the horizon.

I have to say this is one of the best Persona 5 fanfics i have read ever. Keep it up!

I started reading this as I neared the end of my first Persona 5 playthrough, and I liked this story so much that it made me push through the rest of the game just so I could understand how every event was portrayed in this story. It's funny that you say that Sae is a NOTP, but after checking the AN you had at the end of your cancelled Saekira fic, I realized we both thought the same thing: "What do you mean I can't date the hot lawyer?"

I don't think you need me to tell you that you did an amazing job with this story. The way you write in the detail to complement every action or line of dialogue is extraordinary to me. You also made Akira a far more relatable character by giving him some more background (not that he wasn't relatable before) and it was really interesting information. It really furthered the story and bridged gaps nicely.

Thanks for the amazing story, and for doing justice for a pairing that I feel was sorely missed out on in the game itself.

Wow just, wow. I give you massive kudos for having Goro be a bit more redeemable, one of the best Persona Fic's I have ever read.

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I loved it. Thank you for writing this.