Ah, man, this is so good! One of the best LWA stories I've read! The time travel concept is so cool and so love young Chariot trying to help save Croix from her sad future. It's so sweet and touching and I love it. I'm really interested to find out how much older Chariot knows about all that's going on, too.

I really loved the part in this chapter where older Croix gets a new memory and loses another. So cool, but also kind of scary. Can't wait to see where that goes and what's Croix's plan is now.

I really hope you continue this! I mean, no pressure, it's just very good and I really enjoy the world you've set up.

This is absolutely adorable! I love this idea, of Chariot visiting and older Croix. It could be one of my favorite concepts for an LWA fanfic, actually. So thank you for making it!

I'm *quite* curious to see where this winds up going, it's very well written so far. Even though this fic is tagged as "drama/angst", I hope it at the very least has a bittersweet ending...though the eternal optimist in me is really hoping for the past to be radically changed and pave the way to a better future.

uuuuuu I read through all three chapters and I'm crying TTATT. Please continue!

I really like the time traveling part of this story. It makes the collapse of their friendship that much more impactful. Looking forward to reading more, take care!

"Are we still friends?" Welp there goes my heart
I love this time travel concept and can't wait for more!

Second chapter has syntax issues caused by FFN. You might have to re-upload.

I like the ideas so far, though I only could read some of the second.