When I read this I have hope for Henry viii. But wouldn't sending Charles out of the ciutnry be better? I can't believe he was alive the whole time!

Hi love the chaptet and i agree with kara it woukd be nice to see a anne and charles story

with this last chapter you made me so happy!

Oh this is so lovely.

Love all your stories. Hope to see you right a new one soon, maybe where Anne and Charles were the ones wed on the way back from France instead of Mary and Charles. I just love how you had Charles and Anne written, would be interesting to see Henry's Great Matter with the two of them together. Maybe with Jane as the object of Henry's desires.

Could you write more anne/charles? Perhaps even a chapter where Henry was able to find a good enough reason to pardon him and allowed them to be together.

Interesting change of events... I have a request: Henry, Anne, and even Elizabeth and Mary Stafford's thoughts on Henry's other children. Even Mary Stafford's bastards by Henry. And what happened to them, esp Mary Tudor.

This was very telling Jane is mystey in history bc Anne & Katherine are every vocal about their positions. We never knew how Jane truly felt about Anne or if she was as happy as Anne to replace her predecessor or forced to do what her brothers wanted

Either way great fic. Also did Jane die like in history? Is her son still in the line of scucession?

That was bittersweet, realizing g they had traditions he wasn't part of. At least George & Francis asked him to go sleighing with them. And he came to terms with it all at the end

i was crying when i read this!

I really love how Henry makes sure to always be with in that day and how she uses he's quote when he dies!

Can you write a one-shot about Henry visiting Anne's bed.

I understand what you are trying to say and your presentation was flawless as always, but to be honest I don't concider being partially responsible for someone losing their husband, child and nearly life is comparable to 'saving' (as if she planned or activly did anything) someone from a huge idiot who thinks he can sleep around like the little man-whore he is but cannot keep his hissy-fit for himself when the woman he denies having ever been truly married to, dances with a widower on his command. I know the world is like that and that Anne wasn't a saint either but if the whole world and Jane expect her to face the consecuences of her actions (no matter if they were intentional or not) than Jane should have the courage to do as she preaches and take responsibility for hers (also no matter if they were intentional or not).
Sorry for my language but hypocrisy makes me sick and there is SO much in this chapter. Both from Jane and indirectly also Henry. But as I said, the inherent flaws of the characters are hardly your fault. I actually am really impressed that you did such a good job and evoced such genuine feelings.

Poor Jane...her scheming didnt really make her happy. I wish she had lived in the story, but she is feeling the pain she inflicted on Anne. Yes i know Anne did this to Katherine but I just can't imagine Anne stepping through the blood of innocents for a crown.

Love this!