I am reading this and it is so perfect! Love it and need more! This is so perfect, the love, the angst!

A good story, I must admit, the plot was fine, POV was standard, but the lack of strong emotion and character. don't get me wrong the characters weren't OOC, but it would be better if you made it where the diamonds showed a little more emotion for pinks final words. Like I'm sure if someone they truly cared about passed in their arms, they would be hurt at least, depressed at most. no matter a leader role, a tyrant, a dictator, king, hell even a council. so yeah but overall I say your story is a A-

Dude this was beast are you going to make another?!

And that's it. White's finally succumbed to the nothingness and I gotta say, I could feel that. The pain, the sorrow, everything. It's so present and is very much felt.
This was a very good fic and I enjoyed it. Thank you.

Very sad. I could feel the emotion in every scene and can't help but feel bad for White and her visions. It's just tragic. Good job.

A beautiful death. I could definitely feel the pain, the anguish, the sorrow. Everything. It was pure, unbridled and I loved it. You did amazing work here, good job.

Yes, unfortunately we do know what's coming. But of course, we know what the prophecy is. Interesting to see the Diamonds get it and know of it so far ahead.
Everything was written very well. I liked it. Keep it up.

Very interesting. I agree that Jasper deserves to have met her Diamond. I think it's only fair and you did an amazing job at that scene. As for Pink meeting her first corrupted gem, that was definitely something. The horror at it all. You did a great job at conveying her emotion there.
Everything was done so well. Great job!

Nice chapter. I enjoyed it.

The relationships forming are interesting. Good job.

So... I like what you've got going on here. The whole thing with the Diamond Authority is interesting and I gotta admit, you really showed your skill here.
And there's Rose.
I'm very curious as to where this goes. Good job.

Interesting beginnings.

my heart! omg you wrote it soooo greatly! i felt everything! cant wait for the next su story you publish!

I really do feel bad for White. It took so long to know the meaning of love, and to really experience it, so that in the end it would end up becoming a tragedy with remains of illusion. It became a computer for that, right? Computers have no need to feel anything.

I can not imagine how Yellow and Blue should be taking this. His poor friend has fallen into a terrifying, mechanical vacuum, in addition to clearly having succumbed to madness. They must feel fatal.

It was a great job, my friend. I hope to read some new work of yours soon in this fandom. Good luck on your way and see you on another occasion

Postdata- Piiiiiiink! (crying)

I really love this fic. The last chapter chapters have been a direct kick to my heart (poor White, man) and seriously I am interested in knowing the terrible evolution that will have White after all this chaos. The reactions of Yellow and Blue Diamond are also intriguing to me.

Please continue writing, wonderful person.

Are you going to continue with the tales of Scary! White and Steven? Those were cool too!