| Reviews for The Journey of Ash |
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Guest chapter 30 . 6/18 Can't wait to see ash beat giovanni! |
Guest chapter 30 . 6/16 Please update soon. |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/16 He doesn't wear a hat!? What!? But Ash always wears a hat! |
Rehan Acraman chapter 30 . 4/18 Next update plssss. I want to see Cynthia and Ash together again.. |
PhoenixWyvern chapter 30 . 2/10 Yeah about Carly threat level well Cazzidy: She is cranked at 11 Carly: EXPOSE GIOVANNI OR GET A TANK |
fiahy567 chapter 29 . 12/1/2019 Cool I really liked this chapter but I was wondering if ash could get a lavitar by chance? Please update soon |
Poseidon3000 chapter 29 . 11/24/2019 good fic |
PhoenixWyvern chapter 29 . 11/17/2019 Wow...wait why brimg larpas in so soon, wasn't she caught when Ash went to orange Islands Carly: *eatings Ice cream* and where are we in the AN |
Dr1zzy chapter 29 . 11/13/2019 Great ch thx for the update |
dantezess chapter 5 . 10/23/2019 This seems a bit rushed to me, why would a gym leader so readily abandon their gym to travel with a stranger that they have had all of maybe 2 conversations with and known for less than a day? Other than that though the grammar is good I like the idea of an aura wielding ash and I love the fact he has a Gyarados so early on. I just hope this version of aura is reasonable, for some reason authors like to either make aura entirely useless or so strong that ash can one punch a pissed off Tyranitar there's no in between lol. Keep up the great work I look forward to reading the rest of this fic :) |
anarion87 chapter 28 . 10/15/2019 nice chapter |
midnightscar17 chapter 28 . 10/15/2019 On hand Charizard not charmeleon |
Guest chapter 4 . 8/31/2019 I like the story but I thought I should mention Gyrados can't learn watergun, bubble, or bubble beam. Just thought you should know. |
PhoenixWyvern chapter 27 . 8/9/2019 Dude I would go balls deep into Fire emblem I'm not that stupid to ignore it. And had an Idea that after the gym battle Ash and Brock briefly run into our characters again but with Phoenix having an injured arm and they are at the Pokemon Center getting their pokemon healed and of course Phoenix's arm patched (Aka Raven is using her healing aura) and they actually go their separate ways after leaving Cinnabar. Another thing...MR. lets him play Fire Emblem it's a good game...don't hold the Switch hostage I mean come on Cazzidy and Carly have a World of Warships addiction going on now. Cazzidy & Carly: Bismarck VS Yamato |
midnightscar17 chapter 27 . 8/8/2019 Why albus i hated dumbldork. Why not gandulf |