Awww how cute!

I hate Namine. I have NEVER liked Namine. Not even in the game. But the way you wrote her is making me hate her even more. Maybe it’s because I’m obsessed with AkuRoku, though.

Oh...poor Axel... I can sense his heartbreak already. I can also sense that there is a possibly heartbroken *me* in the near future. Or maybe not. I hope not.

No disrespect to you personally. I just don’t really understand what I was supposed to take away from it. Nobody changed or grew, and I rooted for Axel to find someone who actually cared about him. Was Naminé the one meant to be saying the quip in the Summary?

This story made me angry, but I don’t think it was supposed to. Axel was kind of likeable, Roxas was an ass, and Naminé was an ass. Roxas is exactly the kind of person you hate to have sex with, exclusively or otherwise; he’s in such deep denial, both about being possessive of Axel and thinking he himself is a nice person who cares about people’s feelings when he clearly do. He dates Naminé for no reason, and sure, she acts like a bitch, but he treats her terribly and stays with her for no reason than...I guess bored? Nothing in the story is concluded really by the end; here are a bunch of disconnected vignettes that sort of advance the “plot”, and then it just kind of stops.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! that was adorable...

Roxas is sweet.

I'm incredibly late for a lot of the chapters and I'm sorry, but I really loved each and every one. It's making me a little sad because based off of the summary, something is bound to go wrong. Then again, something always goes wrong in these types of stories. I'm rooting for the two of them SO hard but I just know it'll happen! Ugh, I'm such a romantic...

Chapter after chapter I'm getting more impressed by this world you've managed to create. I could never fabricate a setting so debauched. Talk about written fantasy! Everyone's so consistently in tune with their agreed environment. I can't believe how natural a setting like this is. Good stuff, as usual. And as if Axel would speak up about his little hogged Roxy time. Please! I can sooooo tell that the guy's practically on cloud nine! All he needs now is for Roxas to finally realize how magically delicious being exclusive really could be for them!

Well fuck you Roxas, don't you feel like a dick. Lol, so Selphie just out there doing her thaaaaaaang haha! Danm Selphie! Lol, Selphie said you gotta get to picking while the pickin's good! Boy they just a bunch of nasties ain't they? (Dead laughing) But i'm lowkey slash highkey mad that you swerved that sexy time I was waiting on. Like, you a slick one! Lol

First of all, Im glad Namine got the fuck out of there. I can't even say I dislike her anymore, she just didn't fit in with the group. In fact, she was the most "normal" out of them all, but I got so sucked in to the universe that I didn't even want to see that most of what she said and expected of Roxas was, well, normal. AND, Roxas and Axel! I feel like Roxas is trying to make it up to Axel for being dumb, in a way? That, or he's really fucking oblivious and only wants romance because it's Axel's first...ugh. Someine knock some sense into him! You kinda get the feeling that everyone else knows how Axel feels EXCEPT Roxas. Come on, man! Be smarter than this! Omg, I'm so addicted to this...

Ayyyyye, my boy bout to scooooore! Now that Naminè's finally out of the picture, the AkuRoku body party is now back in session! But I'm still worried. Roxas, babe. -_- There's a difference between normalizing the intimacy of sex and outright being ignorant of it. I wanna know so badly why Axel is the least experienced! Is it because of potential feelings for Roxas? Would Axel have been as confortable with this dare if it was, say, Sora who was on the other side of it? Actually, I'm still on the fact that he so easily whored himself to Demyx while at that concert. 'I'm your biggest fan' be damned. What was that about? You obviously have to have a certain mindset to be a part of Roxas's group– if Axel's so "innocent" why the hell is he with these horny bastards? And Roxas wants to make his first BJ romantic– despite it being initiated by a dare– yet he still can't figure out that Axel has the biggest hots for him? Roxas can actually do romance and mean it? So many questions! The cool thing about this kind of setting is that I can't tell what might affect what. What I do know though is that this little ronantic rendezvous is either gonna extremely well or extremely poor. I'm excited either way!

Daaaaaaamn, Rox the Pimp is at it again! Haha, he's probably so lost, like 'the fuck did I do?' My boy so clueless. He's like the perfect depiction of how boys are getting to be these days. Like, were you ever gonna use your brain at any point in time or were you gonna just let Jr. handle everything? Namine shouldn't have went after Axel either. I hate girls like that. They'll go after the ones that messed with their boyfriend harder than they'd ever actually go after the boyfriend himself. Axel didn't need to be hit, she wildin' out now! Namine bout to bust some windows now! Fucked with the wrong one today, haha! Bust my boy's lip, damn. Axel just trying to score a point for once, shit! You know he's a softy under all that devilish charm and exuding sexuality! Love it, as usual! The fast updates are making me jealous as a fellow writer. I should probably get on that...

Ahh, so THAT'S the problem. It's not necessarily that Axel has feelings for him (though I'm a hundred percent sure that he does) but the fact that he feels like he's being used. I totally understand that. Still, if Axel was tired of being used, he should have said something. Everyone is agreeing that the poor doofus is clueless, so why not clue him in? Or...hell. A bigger part of me is saying that somewhere in his head, he knew what Naminé really meant. But! He's realized that he's seriously messed up this time and hopefully he's going to fix it. Their life isn't at all easy, but it's the life they chose to live

Theeeere we go. I'm really glad Kairi said something because I don't think anyone else would have. Well, not to Roxas or Naminé's face. Clearly they all noticed because of what Selphie deunkenly said. I hope he does break up with her, for the simple fact that they're just not compatible. If he tries to force it, it'll make things worse. (And part of me thinks Naminé's still going to freak out over the free pass thing. I guess we'll see)