Thanks for the update. Hope to hear more from you soon

Nice chapter. Any update?

This rewrite is very good. A nice start of things.

dude, I was just reading why did you removed all of them. I though you said it was 1st june...

What about the white walker?

Aemon has the right to be resentful towards Lyanna and the Starks, imo. She was young, but girls younger than her married, so her youth isn't a complete excuse for her seflish nature. But he should be far angrier with Rhaegar.

Good story. I like Aemon, but I feel bad for Aegon. Ahh lol. He should have just married Aemon's daughter.

great chapter

I see that Aegon is preparing his campaign, in my opinion, Aemon has made many mistakes, not adequately investigate the alleged death of Aegon is just one of them.

One thing, Aemon treats Lyanna like a bitch, because her brother fell in love with her, but he himself wished Elia, his brother's wife, if Lyanna was a whore then so it was Ellia, it does not make sense to despise someone who he is dead, especially he who wants his brother's wife, you do not believe.

Regarding Jon Snow, I do not know what to think about him, He should hate Aemon in my opinion, his uncle, his family, he sent him to the wall without any reason, except to be the illicit son of his brother (In my opinion it was more than anything his hatred of Lyanna), and then send him a letter with a gift, is trying to buy Jon for something, if something is clear in everything, is that Aemon, has been a miserable to Jon, and the boy in my opinion should minimally hate him, I'm hoping they get to know and Jon can give his uncle something of his mind, so that the king understands what he did and the consequences of it.

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Aegon your fool lord conningtons is the real traitor not aemon and he was right about rhaegar an aegon you don't depend the iron thrones.

Jon Connington is a poisonous fool and will cause way to much trouble.! The head of Jin C. the traitor Must fall.!

This is bad.! Tywin on the loose, Pycelle running free in the Red Keep and he is leaving town before Tywin has even finished packing ? ! This is a disaster waiting to happen.!

So, Varys who seems a decent judge of character just mis-calculated on Jon C.? I think it was a bit less simple then that. He blew it big time and underestimated J C's ability to be sneaky. That is a huge error on Varys' part.

...make his children MORE HAPPY ! Not more happier.! ...So what if the Iron Island rebel.? The Dragons will get good practice in the fighting. Aegon will not win, not even if Visarys helps him and I think Dany will support her brother ahead of a cousin and her clearly unbalanced brother. She can already see madness in him.

Well of course Magic is not extinct ! Westeros is full of Magic even if few people recognise it.! The Wall is Magic, the castle of Storm's End is magic, Winterfell is full of Magic and the Direwolves are Magic.! What sort of wife was Catelyn to Benjen that she only gave him one child.? Did they hate each other.? She was the most fertile member of her whole family yet just two Babes.? ! What ever is going on there.?

wether intended or not this does weaken the Martells hold with a Royal married to a Bannerman's House.

Yes Theon did make a very foolish mistake andd died because of it. But the Princess needs to be punished too all be it privately since she in effect instigated it by being way to familiar with someone she could noever be married to. Her Honour could be questioned over this. King's Landing is Not Dorne and she can not act as Dornish men aand bastards do.! She is a Royal Princess and should never have allowed such behavior from any male. Not just Theon but ANY male.!