I am into chapter 4 and I can see potential, I wish the author would write more. The more that you work on your craft, they better you get. So I hope one day the author comes back and continues to work on it or maybe make a revised version of something. Maybe create a new story.

Let's say the piece. Mmmh, interesting but a little dull, I was expecting a little more, and you didn't updated this story in such a long time, mmmh.

Well, no sign of you for almost two years now; I hope that you're doing well wherever you are, even if you don't ever come back to continue/finish any of your works

interesting.

damn. shirou's really fucking weak.

Hey! The story is really good! Why isn't it updated? Why!? Why!? Why!?... Anyhow, I'll just add it to my followed story list, just in case...

Of course you ended up nerfing Shirou...

Is it wrong of me to hope you keep Shirou out of familias?

Maldita sea por qué siempre son las mejores historias las que son abandonadas, que ojalá no sea el caso con ésta ya quiere decir llevo un año sin actualizar
Definitivamente este es uno de los mejores crossovers que e leído, por favor amigo vuelve pronto a actualizar este fanfic es muy extrañado.

Agradesco profundamente por tu decisión no iniciar con un protagonista absolutamente roto
Dar como resultado personaje con posibilidad de desarrollo en ese mundo al que fue enviado por ti.

Try not to make certain topics to long, because that’s what you did with this and it made it kinda boring on the last three chapters.

He should have access to an easy source of low effort powerups, namely looking though the displays of weapons for sale in Babel, there's weapons of all qualities for sale there, which mean he can easily find weapons that are within his capability to trace, while also being very useful.

He might be able to project low quality magic swords, and seeing as magic swords are essentially wands with a preloaded spell and limited charges, the ability to produce them for just some Prana, would be a great ability to have.

good stuff, good stuff, waiting for more, hope you haven't died, so on and so on

Meh

Damn this fanfic only has 9 chapters and here Shirou still had not been blessed by a goddess or went inside the dungeon.