update plese

Good story so far! Hope you can update soon!

Griffendor obviously

I really liked your story.

So far it's just a massive circle jerk off for the Ben 10 characters. You need to be more detailed in your writing. Harry is 14 and has been emotionally abused and neglected, nearly died several times, saw a friend get killed in front of him, has been tortured and is naturally wary of people. Please stop writing him like a 10 year old who thinks their life is horrible because they were grounded. Also, the fuck?! From what I can remember, there has been little to no magic in Ben 10, mostly science and the biological ability to use and manipulate energy.

This makes no sense why the hell would the reveal of aliens and the Omnitrix be a disaster in the magical Communities? They are quite use to non human sentient beings and while the existence of advance alien technology on Earth would be met with some fear because if muggle's have that technology and find out about them that would be bad. But they can also use the technology as well since their magic might not interfere with some of it. And why would they care about non magical humans or rather hybrids with powers?

They would be confused at first perhaps because they would assume these where wizards and witches and they are a threat to the statue of secrecy. They only people who would have a real problem with any of these revelations are pure blood bigots and they are a minority and most of the magical world don't seem to care what they think. Magical Britain and perhaps Magical America and Bulgaria seems to be the only place that Pure bloods Supremacist have a lot of influence in the governments and even then they can't act overtly because the people won't stand for it. Which makes sense since most Magicals are half-bloods (by the definition of pure bloods anyway) and considered second class citizens at best and muggleborns are like third class citizens. So most of the magical world doesn't care what pure blood bigots think and they can't have any blatant discriminatory laws, it was only after Voldemort took over the British ministry that, that changed because they people knew Voldemort was in control and they feared opposing him.

so seriously I don't see the point of this whole ploy it stinks of convoluted nonsense to make things unnecessarily difficult. No doubt so Ben doesn't just start crushing death eaters and Voldemort himself with his more powerful Aliens that the "Unforgivable's" would just bounce off of.

You should put Ben 10 in Slytherin. Nice story can't wait to see the next chapter.

This is a bunch of feminist bullshit I despise people like you your mother should've swallowed you

I'm like to see this story is continuing, I honestly thought you forgotten about it anyway , Ben meeting the rest of Harry's friends and the flashback of Gwen showing off her powers , I really can't wait for the reaction of Harry and his friends when Ben reveal the truth about his power, I can picture it Harry with shock face , Hermione asking Ben million questions nonstop, and finally Ron would probably freak out that be funny, anyway keep up the awesome work.

Great story, love the fact that Gwen showed those jerks their place, I initially thought it would be Waybig storming in the trial but Gwen was really badass as well. Good job, keep it up

Heya buddy, You have a great story going. Please keep updating it

And there goes the Fudge, the rotten fudge. lol (Sorry, joking...) Enjoyed so much! Just an idea, I hope Ben to be a top student in Transfiguration in Hogwarts... And will Ben's Omnitrix be revealed in some time? If it will, when? I don't like Ben fooling everyone because of that nonsense that Gwen can summon aliens... I like the concept but it's hard to watch him becoming a liar... So I want the truth to be revealed when Voldemort tries to steal the prophecy... Again, it was just an idea.

It's a nice story, keep up the good work.

Could you make this a benXhope story?

It would be nice if Ben would be placed in Slytherin.

I think this is a really good story and the only thing I siding like was how little ben used the ultimatrix

I like that you're fusing and tweaking the two worlds instead of using the standard "Ben gets stranded in another universe" plot. You need a spellchecker though.