I love this story! I'm a huge fan of sisfics and immediately, I loved the idea of the sister being the oldest one! It's something different from what I've read and I love it! Also, I totally understand why this chapter ended so abruptly, I'm excited to see what you'll be doing with the next episodes since you started loving the show after the third episode! I'm really looking forward to some sis/bro moments ahaha

As for the phobia, maybe something that would be easy to incorporate in a chapter/case? Something like fear of heights or fear of fire

Next really good chapter I'm curious about what will be next! Looking forward for more and sending creative vein & hugs!

Yay! I really enjoy this story! Alison is my favorite character, I really enjoy this chapter! Aww I really enjoy the sibling bond, that was very cute! I love it! such a great chapter. Love it!

This is such a beautiful story, I really enjoy reading this. I love the idea of the boys having a sister. Great job! I really love it!

Excellent story! Looking forward for more! :)