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Christina831 chapter 20 . 3/30 Just reread this story and it's still so so good! Absolutely one of my faves! |
talkfix chapter 16 . 7/20/2019 I'm a woman and I like to talk and fix things. Sasha is kinda closed minded when regards to gender roles. It's something I never considered would be part of her personality but I guess it works if she's married to Daryl. There are some conventional stereotypes but I like how theses group of friends compliment their differences but are still vastly different in personalities. Yet their bond and loyalty for one another may be fiction but its lovely to read and imagine. The friendship is a beautiful thing. :) |
Lovelyshmi chapter 20 . 5/7/2019 This was so much fun to read. I was so happy that Andrea didn't leave Shane at the alter. She just needed a chance to calm herself. A big wedding with lots of people can be quite intimidating and I'm so glad that Michonne, her BFF, knew what to do for her. I love team family and how they insert themselves into each other's lives and how they're always present and supportive of one another. We should all be so blessed to have friends like them, even if they do come at the most inconvenient times, LOL. Madison deserved a wonderful family and she got one with Rick and Michonne. GOOD READ! |
Lovelyshmi chapter 19 . 5/7/2019 I loved that Rick and Michonne exposed Paula and her husband for what they are. They only wanted a paycheck, not Madison. They kidnap a little girl and expect to be rewarded with guardianship?! Really?! Where are we doing that at?!. Now, everyone in team family is pregnant...I think that's great. Sasha needs to know that when women are close and spend so much time together, their menstrual cycles sync up, so she's next, LOL. Now if we can just get Shane and Andrea down the isle. I'm so happy that Madi is with the family that she belongs with. Rick and Michonne are great parents. |
Lovelyshmi chapter 18 . 5/4/2019 Lori should be ashamed of herself! That stunt that she pulled with Paula and Dwight will do nothing but backfire and Rick gave Dwight exactly what he had coming. No man has the right to lay hands on Michonne or Madi and the fact that he endangered them both and made them upset, well I'll just say that it's a good thing that team family was there to pull him off of Dwight. I was relieved to see that Michonne did not lose the baby, but she has to take it easy now. Shane and Andrea are really different and I hope that they make it. I'm sure that this little fiasco has helped everyone get their priorities straight. And the letter from Rosita was heartwarming. |
Lovelyshmi chapter 17 . 5/4/2019 Love how deeply in love Rick is with Michonne and that they've decided to make a wonderful family together. And...Michonne is pregnant, but my girl has to take it easy. Lori isn't worth getting riled up about, but I wanted to give Andrea low five for slapping the taste out of Lori's mouth. Then, Michonne steps up and really tells her about herself. It's that kind of confrontation that really makes an impact on someone. Not the cursing and screaming...just the harsh truth plainly spoken in a normal tone. I know that Lori will never forget it. I so scared for Madison. Where is my little munchkin? |
Lovelyshmi chapter 16 . 4/16/2019 There's just so much goodness in this chapter. First, I loved that Michonne and Rick were able to have 'the talk'. They really needed to air their thoughts and feelings so that they could each understand the reasoning behind certain decisions that seemed to be creating unwanted tension and misunderstandings. I'm so pleased that they gave each other the safe place to be honest and open and using 'the truth box' was just a stroke of genius. I think that more of us could use one because we would sure be the better for it. Shane has a reckless mouth but he and Andrea are adorable, if not in their own obnoxious ways. And I'm happy that Sasha is now going to have the baby. She and Daryl are good together. We all should be blessed with friends like this and I love the way that you portray this wonderful group of people that have chosen to be one another's second family. This chapter was a GEM. |
Lovelyshmi chapter 15 . 4/13/2019 Keeping secrets is Kryptonite to any relationship, especially in times of crisis. The cold hard truth, told by the one closest to you can actually keep you safe from harm. Rick and Michonne have always been honest and up front with each other and that really needs to be true now of all times. Both are hurting because they feel the wedge growing, but both are trying so hard not to hurt the other. It's like standing inside of a hole trying to dig in, but the dirt keeps on staying put, no matter the effort to rid yourself of it. Guilt is also coming into play which is neither party's to claim. They really need to have the talk and return to being each other's best friend. |
Lovelyshmi chapter 14 . 4/13/2019 I'm glad that Jerry found out what the deal was with Paula. I knew that she wanted something and that he showing up meant no good for Madison. Michonne made a terrible mistake going out into weather like that and then when she felt her brakes not operating in full capacity and then to try to reach for the phone when she could barely see...not good! I'm praying that she's okay and the Madi is okay as well. I'm so scared for them right now. And I know that Lori has something up her sleeve. Rick should not have gone over to her house to talk to her and never should've gone into the house to do so. NOT GOOD! I just want everyone to be okay, but I feel like a sledgehammer is about to come into play. |
Lovelyshmi chapter 13 . 4/13/2019 I really, REALLY, Really enjoyed this chapter. I loved the scenes that you incorporated in the this chapter that came from the show. These two need their quality time. And then, the scene that Mike made just before Rick kicked his ass was explosive. I knew what was about to happen and I knew that Mick had planned to pick a fight with Rick when he invaded Michonne's space and wouldn't leave. Granted, he gave Mike the ammunition that he was looking for, but what kind of man would Rick be if he let any man put his hands on his wife and upset his children? Rick is an ALPHA male and reacted accordingly. I respect that and I'm glad that Michonne was able to handle her man in the way that respected him as her husband and then communicated her feelings and what she needed from him. I just love these two and I see a Grimes baby coming because Rick loses all sanity when he touches his wife, LOL. |
Lovelyshmi chapter 12 . 4/13/2019 Le sigh...this was just a dream to read. I mean, it was a beautiful wedding for a stunningly lovely couple. All of us should have friends like this to be happy, supportive, respectful and encouraging for us. THIS WAS LOVELY and I'm simply bursting with joy for the two of them. The imagery, the description and the words that were shared between the two of them were just spellbinding and down to earth. So much truth between them is what will prove to be the cornerstone of the strength of this marriage. Honesty, love and respect will always carry you through in any kind of relationship and I think that is one of the most powerful things that resonates with all people about Richonne. It all comes from a true place with them. I'm so happy for them because they deserve this kind of happiness with each other. BRILLIANT chapter. This made me so happy that I'm going to read it again. |
Lovelyshmi chapter 11 . 4/13/2019 Mike and Lori should get a clue. Why try to hold on to someone who doesn't want you? I'm happy for Michonne and Rick and I really want them to have a chance at love without any interference from shiftless, shady, jealous types of people who try to corrupt your life because they are miserable. Lori and Mike are in for it now that Michonne knows the truth. I can't wait to keep reading. |
Lovelyshmi chapter 10 . 3/7/2019 Rick knows that Michonne is scared at this point. I see where he's coming from in wanting to protect Madison, but he needs to give Michonne a moment to process all of what he just said. Marriage is a HUGE commitment and not to be entered into lightly, especially when the stakes are as high as they are for these three people. I really want to see Michonne express what's on her mind and quit going quiet when Rick comes at her like that. I think that he would get a much better perspective of her thoughts and feelings if she would share them and stand strong. She loves him and is scared of losing him by making a mistake. He always gives himself the latitude to criticize and get in his feelings when she can't move as fast as he wants her to. I think that's unfair. She'll come on board and see his reasoning but he has to be open to see hers as well. |
Lovelyshmi chapter 9 . 3/7/2019 Wow, talk about a dream snatcher! This Paula comes out of the woodwork and all of a sudden she wants to take Madi? I mean, WTF? And as far as Rick and Michonne go...WTF again? They're starting to make serious headway and Rick just shits all over a good thing? Granted, they hadn't spoken yet about where they want the relationship to go and I'm all there for him wanting to have a relationship, but to get mad at the idea of flowers being the catalyst to open the doors to her heart was just an over sensitive conniption fit! I wasn't just because Michonne responded to some materialistic fantasy of their relationship. It was a culmination of everything up to that point and if Rick doesn't have a clue, let me tell you...NOTHING about receiving three dozen red roses is cliché. It's effing romantic, even if they're not her favorite! It seems to me that in that instant, Rick was the one who was running scared of the relationship going into the next phase. They could've made love and, after getting all of the hormones out of the way, then talked, all night if need be. They know that they're in love with each other anyway, so it wouldn't have hurt anything IMO. Not feeling the tantrum Rick. Yeah, go handle Mike for overstepping later, but don't hide your fear behind something like that. |
Lovelyshmi chapter 7 . 3/7/2019 Well, that's Rick Grimes for ya...steadfast, honest enough to brave to cross the line of friendship for what he knows will be a love that will last a lifetime. Now that he's given Michonne something to ponder, lol, the question lingers...how long will she take to realize that they're meant to be? |