Reviews for Adoption Works
Raven chapter 4 . 6/4/2019
kinda weird having them sleep in the same bed but then again i slept in my parent's bed until i was 10 so i can't say shit about that... me sharing personal live shit while giving a review? more likely then u think buds

pushing that shit to the sid e did u write it that way cuz of the uhh study thing- look it was science thing that shows sleeping in the same bed as another person would help build trust faster. if u did kudos (is it spelled that way i dk) to you buddy !
Raven chapter 3 . 6/4/2019
muse seems to be a mysterious thing... also you forced my hand into listening to that song and now i can't read the name of your chapter with out thinking of the song and singing the chapter title out loud... f o r sh ame on u princess... for shame

loved the fact that ace was down to murder the old hag, love me some murderous kids, ALSO I SEE U TRYING TO BE SLICK, WHEN IS WHITEBEARD COMING IN I WISH TO KNOW CUZ I WILL BET MY LIFE SAVINGS ON HIM BEING IN THIS FANFIC AND IF HE'S NOT I WILL REVOL T

that flirt at the end also was- perfezione! bellissimo! it was great made my heart melt good job makes me mad at you knowing that this is a slow burn fic and that it will be ONE MILLION CHAPTERS LATER UNTIL THEY EVEN LOOK AT EACH OTHER YOU ARE BLUEBALLING YOUR READERS PRINCESS IS THIS WHAT YOU WANT- ARE YOU AN EVIL GOD LAUGHING DOWN AT US AS W JUST WANT VIOLET AND CORA TO KISS ALREADY
Raven chapter 2 . 6/4/2019
You know what brook cooing over him being a grandpa is adorable that's great and pasta is tasty as fuck even if i saw no real use for the whole going out to eat thing- kinda felt like it slowed down the writing for no reason? unless you were trying to show that cora is so used to using sign language with his friends that he forgets that not everyone knows it! which i think is really sweet it made me think of this video i saw on youtube where a small town learned how to use sign language for this deaf guy and that was pure kindess- the best of human nature I say !
Raven chapter 1 . 6/4/2019
CUTE AS FUCK OHHHHH MY G PL S IM DYING SO CU T E HOLY SH I T
AnimeObsessionGirl4ever chapter 9 . 7/9/2018
I love this
princess-snow510 chapter 9 . 12/20/2017
Sabos parents are such assholes...
Why someone would go out of their way to make a child so miserable ... Smh I can't even...
princess-snow510 chapter 8 . 11/10/2017
this is great
rubytacenda chapter 8 . 11/10/2017
love the story such a cute one. Realllllly love it!
gabrielsangel23 chapter 7 . 9/18/2017
Please please please please please update as soon as you get the chance! I absolutely love this story I can't wait for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/3/2017
Amazing story
Guest chapter 6 . 7/3/2017
So glad I found this story bc I really love it. Can't wait for the next update
Rboooks chapter 3 . 6/18/2017
THIS WAS SO CUTE! I LOVE IT! I don't usually read second person but this got me hooked especially when the "me"'s behavior. She's great! And awwwwwwwwwwww ASL are adorable but screw that orphanage lady!