Reviews for The Dragon Rider: Rise Of A Rider
Villicus chapter 18 . 9/10
Man that first segment was brutal, but nothing less expected especially after the first ever chapter. Really excited to see the eventual confrontation, and I do feel sad for everyone else in the dark about Gumball's fate. I'm very curious to see if Carrie will figure it out, though.

As always, keep up the good work. Pax tecum.
Ms. Sleepy Clover chapter 17 . 6/24
Calling it now, Penny will inevitably be a Damsel-in-Distress for Gumball to rescue.
DaniJIE chapter 16 . 6/7
This is one of the few fan stories that respects the humor of the series and gives Gumball a character development without falling for OOC.

As well as integrating a character like Alaska that adapts well in humor, but be serious when it corresponds to the situation as it happens with the other characters.

This story adapts humor well and balances the personalities of the characters well to serious situations.

How I wish that was done in other Gumball stories.

Bye.
Ms. Sleepy Clover chapter 16 . 4/9
Hmm, is Gumballs family gonna get like badass power suits or something to help fight? Cuz woah, that would be fucking badass.
Plus Gumball, you do realize it is just as cheesy by calling out the fact that your line is cheesy.
Ms. Sleepy Clover chapter 14 . 4/9
"But it all changed, when the Fire Nation attacked."
Villicus chapter 16 . 4/5
The exposition continues! And the lore is revealed at last, though I'm sure that's not all.
Villicus chapter 15 . 2/2
Great to see you back. Powerful passages you've got here, really driving home the aftermath of the previous chapters.
Ms. Sleepy Clover chapter 1 . 1/11
Dun'nun had the same idea Revan did in The Old Republic.
Villicus chapter 14 . 10/15/2019
Short chapter, but understandable. Excited to finally get into this world, honestly. Intriguing enough, and makes me very eager for the next chapter already. Only criticisms are that it could do with a spelling and grammar check, as quite a few of them are present. Other than that, no problems here.
Campfire the great chapter 13 . 9/25/2019
Please make more. Chapters to everest gone missing or please tell us what happened to everest! Please it's just not that you can take your time but I just really need another chapter but also you are great with what you do and we all want some more of all of your work. Don't think about what bad comments you have our what things might have happened. JUST DO WHAT YOU LOVE TO DO AND YOU'LL BE HAPPY!...
Villicus chapter 13 . 8/20/2019
Welcome back, and thank you for this awesome update! I was concerned that the story would go the way of Gumball and Alaska living separately from everyone else, but I'm glad they chose not to. I'm also really looking forward to the world you've built outside TAWoG, as I was entranced by it from the very first chapter.

Onwards and upwards. Pax tecum.
Qfsqqz chapter 1 . 8/15/2019
Wait, so does that mean the state Alaska is actually a dragon?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/2/2019
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Coco TheFox chapter 12 . 4/23/2019
I guess that Gumball is actually dead.
While his new self, is around there, saving people in danger.
Villicus chapter 12 . 4/23/2019
Finally. The combat begins. I'm a bit worried that the stakes will become as high as, well, the prologue, because that's a huge step up and, as you said, I'm afraid we'll never reach that point. I do encourage you to keep writing, because a lot of people, myself included, are really enjoying your content. By all means, pace yourself and write when you feel like it, but I really wouldn't want this great work be left in the dust like many of the other stories here.
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