I really hope you come back to this story it’s a pretty good read.

COME BACK TO THIS STORY PLEAAASE THIS IS SOOOO GOOOD... I dont care about the harem I only want the kingdom/empire building ad well as the more tech improvements

Bruh you had to turn it into this..

God I wouldn't believe it if I hadn't just read it, you made a Gary Stu in bloody warhammer?

I hate your MC as he is fucking arrogant, he believes he knows everything and is superior to everyone. Yes the imperium is not perfect but it's by far the only good thing to happen for humans in the galaxy he despite his criticisms has actually done nothing to help or improve the imperium as a primach instead his actions will most likely lead to civil war and the death of trillions as apparently he believes he can take on everybody.
Also this is warhammer and yet your MC faces no challenges, the ancient elder enslaves herself to him, the powerful technomage does the same. Also he can play with any technology he likes without caution as he suddenly knows more than everybody in the galaxy as well as the emperor who has thousands of years of knowledge and experience and likely has good reasons for his caution.

What the f*ck? A baby smashes through what could count as an orbital drop pod or at least is strong enough to be so... Then goes to survive alone on an unknown planet?

"Can the question as I sudden woke up within a small metal cylinder..." the very first sentence is barely comprehensible English. I'm kinda at a loss of words right now.

Brilliant. Finally the protagonist redeems himself. A world to breed Abhumans for sale? Plots beneath plots? Genetic engineering gone haywire? Transhumanism on the horizon? Subtle politics! Is this truly the Marcus from before? He actually feels powerful now, as a character, and indeed, hero of the story.

Considering the descriptions of how debauched the Eldar were during the Farseer's era, 60 million years ago. Of course sooner or later their society will crumble. It's a given. Considering also that now she's scheming to corrupt a bastion of humanity, it's truly rather sad. Suffer not the xeno to live was never said it jest after all.

The rather random tangents on slavery is rather strange, completely unneeded, and irrational as well. In the first chapters, the protagonist was adapting quite nicely, and then suddenly he decides to forsake practicality for morality once again. Not that I'm complaining truly, since ODIN field does seem like a brainwashing tool more than anything. A shame that he's consorting with a xeno - truly disgraceful.

All of you stupid do yon now how hard it is to right a good story. Let see if you can Mack a deter story than this same characters same but how you will change it.

This story went from an interesting concept, if a bit op even for warhammer to a shitty harem story. Don’t know why people feel the need to add shitty harems into stories.

Are you still alive? And if you have you just stopped writing?

-Able Archer

Hello it seem that you are no longer interested In Writing this story is it okay. For my to we write it with the with all the characters names init I make sure to gith you shout out.

Welp, just re-read this, and besides a few minor spelling and grammar mistakes it's still a good read. Very disappointed this won't be continued. I think Marcus could have created his own heresy eventually, he's got all the tools for a good one. Although he would need to focus on making more allies, the Unbroken and Aiser can't conquer the Imperium alone.