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But Nick and Judy are NOT brother and sister and never will be.
They would (at best) be children of two close families, not raised together at all, and certainly no shared DNA...

So... WildeHopps still a possibility without "dueling banjos" playing in the background

Intense conclusion there, very suspenseful indeed. I'm looking forward to future additions. Keep up the good work, -Winter

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Hmm, this will be interesting to see how this will play out. It's got my interest. :)

Fantastic new chapters. And the truth is finally revealed. Looking forward to your next chapter.

I’m confused, is this story form Judy’s POV or nicks?

Wtf is nanorimo

Why on... Pangea?

Great! Can’t wait for more. Very creative twist might I add

Hey glad I found this story again. Wonderful new chapters. Oh the trouble that follows those two. Lol love it!

It’s a nice story you’ve got here!

There’s one thing that’s bothering me, though. You are aware that bunnies do have whiskers, right?

Interesting concept.

The story is really good, but partly extremely hard to read, so some little things to improve it. 1. Each time you change the viewpoint of the story telling, put down a line of dots, or alike. Else it's hard to notice. I always struggle, because something doesn't fit and have to trace back, where the viewpoint changed. 2. In conversations, especially with more than two characters, show, who speaks. Partly it happens, that you read a good part of a conversation, without knowing who speaks what. 3. Make a Timeline for yourselves. I noticed at some points, something happens over the course of some days, than its week, and then even month, or so, but the time hasn't progressed like that. 4. Ad to the Timeline, what happens, who knows what, who has what. This way continuity errors, are less often. 2 Errors in chapter 11. Judys
Parents enter the room of the board meeting in chapter 10, in chapter 11, they don't know what happened? Judy tells Nick she will give him Bogos
number the next day (end Chapter 10), but in the beginning of chapter 11, only seconds later, Nick already got the number from her.

You have serious continuity issues in this story. Please figure out WHO the Mayor of Zootopia is... you've said it's both Bogo and now Bellweather. Also, Judy's (Nick's) parents are not old enough to have spent 7 years in jail - that makes no sense.

This is an intriguing story, but please work on your continuity. :)