Reviews for Fated Destiny
Megatronus666 chapter 8 . 8/9
The ending actually reminds me of that scene in Captain America: The First Avenger where Bucky slipped out of Cap’s grasp and fell into the depths of the icy sea.
Megatronus666 chapter 7 . 8/9
Masters may not be bulletproof but ideas certainly are.
Megatronus666 chapter 18 . 4/27
Sovereign: (Possesing the deceased Saren’s corpse) I am Sovereign, and this station is mine!
Megatronus666 chapter 1 . 4/26
Sensei Wu: You must be silent, but deadly.
(Beat)
Everyone except Wu: (Falls down laughing)
Jay: That's a fart thing!
Sensei Wu: Unbelievable.
Jackejsh chapter 2 . 4/5
The second chapter in and can already tell that Scathach is a way too OOC in this story, very odd seeing her act like that.
Bridd chapter 17 . 3/7
What I dont get is why she wasnt even around for anything...
Megatronus666 chapter 13 . 2/22
Motion carried. (Slams a gavel down)
Megatronus666 chapter 4 . 2/22
Actually they’re called mortar. It’s a special type of artillery gun that shoots bomb like objects called Mortar shells.

Just wanted to let you know. Other than that small misspelling it’s a interesting and good story.
Regulus Arms chapter 1 . 9/27/2018
Scathach in this series is too ooc
Silver566 chapter 18 . 4/12/2018
MOAR
Silver566 chapter 1 . 1/5/2018
Scathach is best girl and waifu
EL Hunter chapter 18 . 9/16/2017
nice. but i'm wondering why Lev didn't appear at the end. Is it because Olga-Marie is in Chaldea?
trentmillenium619 chapter 17 . 9/8/2017
Chapter seventeen seems a bit to cluttered? But other than the story is going great
RedDragonRevan chapter 14 . 8/26/2017
When are you going to put Scathach back into the story?
Celestial stratos chapter 6 . 7/15/2017
I've read this story on wattpad and wonder why you don't just post all the chapters here.
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