Please don't leave it at that! What will happen to Rosie?

Ahhhhh, this is so good! I’m hoping for an update as soon as you can get one out. The bond between Rosie and Archie is so believable and heartwarming to read. She seems to be a good fixed point for the Riverdale gang (Lord knows they need one). My theory is that Rosie is Kevin’s long lost twin (I’m mostly hoping for it so that she gets out of that AWFUL household). I’m super excited to see where the story goes. Amazing job!

This is amazing. Point blank period. Keep up the good work!

Ok, so I have never seen Riverdale (because I am such a huge fan of the Archie comics and I wasn't really pleased with how they put it to TV show), but holy dang, I loved this story. Rosie is so relatable and Archie just makes her even better. I loved everything about this story and I absolutely can't wait to see what happens next (low-key hope that Mr. Keller is Rosie's true father. Hate her family right now. Will's a jerk).

Oh man, this chapter was so, so painful! Extremely well-written and intense, but the last part especially was hard to get trough.
I feel so terrible for Rosie. She tried her best to make sure everyone was happy, and it ended up backfiring. I did not expect Carol to hurt her in front of everyone. Honestly, Fred should just call social services because like he said, this is abuse, and who knows what else will happen to Rosie if she ever returns to her house. I also felt for Betty when her mom was dragging her out of the school. Alice was such an unpleasant person at the beginning of the show, and she is even worse here! I do hope she eventually softens a bit, but I'm guessing that won't happen right now.
I felt bad for Ms. Grundy and the things she went through, but I'm glad she's leaving because I can never forgive her for her relationship with Archie. No matter how bad her life is, she's still an adult and Archie is a child. I do admire Rosie for being able to have sympathy for Ms. Grundy after she was threatened by her; she's definitely a better person than I am! lol
Thinking now about the positive things that came out of this chapter, it was sweet how Rosie has now come to terms that she has a crush on Archie, and also how Archie couldn't stop staring at Rosie while they were at his locker.
I'm excited to see more of Jughead, Veronica, and Kevin in the next chapter. Keep up the good work, and good luck with your new job! Take your time and take care :)

Plz More Soon it is getting good

Thank God. She is free from her family. I can't believe Alice would disrespect Rose like that. I think Ms Cooper is a hypocrite just because she was a Southside serpent and pregnant. It's like she wants to pretend she's a good girl.

OMG ID BEEN WAITING FOR THIS TO HAPPEN. At least rosie doesnt have to carry all of this by herself

Awesome update :)

It would be so cool is Rosie learned how to fight take self-defense classes in martial arts Jiu Jitsu all different fighting techniques to take her anger out on fighting I like kickboxing you know any type of fighting technique to help her release that motion that she's has pent-up ever since she was born all that anger all that hurt in my time sheets done with all the fighting technique she'll be the best fighter that anybody has ever seen the best martial artist that anybody has ever seen I want to beat the crap out of Carol who the hell does she think she is I don't even think she is Rosie's mother and it's funny how when Fred said that who go to sheriff Keller she shut that s*** down real quick excuse my language I love Archie and Rosie's chemistry you can just tell that they're meant to be and Destiny is just pushing them closer and closer together and I also love the friendship between everybody and how they all care about Rosie cuz she's never felt that before with her friends back and where she used to live or even her family and teacher and I love how compassionate Rosie is I cannot wait for more I love you stories and it's okay about the Charmed thing it was a long shot thank you for responding to it

This might be unpopular opinion but Betty has always been obsessive in nature she is very smart true but her lack of boundaries i think comes from alice and growing up in an environment were she never had any space of her own and now she doesn't leave any for those around her the thing she hates about Alice she does too to her friends ...not respect their opinion and their decisions , putting her nose in their business.
I hope this isn't glossed over i truly hope the trauma festers for a while along with Archie's anger. That slut perception came from some where too it wasn't all Alice, she said Betty kept an accurate description diary so something Betty thought or thinks of Rosie led to that view . as dimwitted as Archie is i hope in his protectiveness to rosie he latches on to that ...i hope the trauma bubbles up insecurities in Rosie and puts her view of people into question especially Betty ...the girl has alot to apologize for and she shouldn't skate off by a simple unspecified "i'm sorry" she isn't responsible for alice nor Carol's behavior but she needs to take ownership of her actions

This might be random but can u do fanfiction with charmed/tvd. That the power of three is caroline,bonnie, and elena their the charmed. The backstory is the witch, melinda warren has a premonition that in the future Three group of friends whose friendship is so strong that is basically Sisterhood will become the most powerful witches of all time they will be known as The Charmed Ones Caroline is like true she has telekinesis Bonnie's like Piper she has the power to freeze time and Elena is like Phoebe she has the power a premonition and the Book of Shadows is full of all the stuff it was from the original Charmed show like spells and different demons and vampire and all these monsters and fairies and all these different creatures and the Book of Shadows was see that buy all the Warren Family line just to prepare The Charmed Ones for one they get their powers and fight evil protect the innocent and Stefan can be a whitelighter like Leo so that him and Bonnie can get together get married have a kid together and their kid will be the most powerful magic being in all the world. Charmed ones are all so connected like for a backstory when they were kids they did this Blood Oath to always be friends forever sisters forever so they cut their hands enjoined the bond and their blood mixed in with each other when they did it as kids. They also inherit the manor from the original Charmed series when they are teenagers from Bonnie's grams who Caroline Bonnie and Elena all call Bonnie grams there grams too. I really hope you try this out I mean it's been in my head for so long that I've wanted somebody to do this story because I'm not a very good Storyteller but it's just an idea which I hope you take up

Theory: Rosie is Kevin's "dead" twin and the baby the Keller's baby is actually the Green's. It would make a lot of sense as to why she shares features with the sheriff and (I'm assuming) Kevin and it would also explain her "family's" attitude toward her...

Damn, I literally have no clue what that whole conversation at the end was about! The suspense is killing me.
This was a really great chapter. The reveal of Kevin's sister was my favorite part. I think that the Greens might have taken Rosie as a baby without the Kellers knowing, but I don't know why. I also loved all the Archie/Rosie moments, and how well Rosie fits into the group.
I wonder how the Grundy situation will be solved here. I'm honestly very excited to see her go down, lol.
I love how you're handling Rosie's family situation and the abuse she's suffered. It's very painful to read, but it also feels so real.

Ooo this is getting good. I have a couple theories but waiting to see if they’ll play out. Can’t wait to read more