| Reviews for A Twist of Fate |
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ShadowFlameDragon03 chapter 8 . 3/9 This is a really great story! I hope to see you continue this story, keep up the great work and I have to ask what do you think of Genderbent Merlin? |
memefarius chapter 8 . 3/6 Jaune Arc the milf hunter and Fated harem owner |
Guest chapter 8 . 12/4/2019 More pls |
Perran Onh chapter 8 . 8/5/2019 Please continue |
Silver Prima chapter 2 . 1/29/2019 I hope you don't cancel this story, as I said before I really enjoy reading it. I'm hitting the favorite button. |
SMV Aria2 chapter 1 . 12/31/2018 Happy New year from the Philippines! |
TheNeah chapter 8 . 9/13/2018 man this is good keep going, man i wonder who esle is gonna apper later in the history |
Misaka Phenex chapter 1 . 9/11/2018 hahaha cute gil but what is the obsession with the arc that should be burn in the face the Earth no that is to good for him he should disappear in all of reality |
Silver Prima chapter 8 . 9/6/2018 You know this is one of the funniest and saddest thing I've read. Its funny how Jaune been reacting and treated. What's sad is that he's no longer free to do what he pleased to do and how he been treated. I know he doesn't care as long he has is (cloud pillow). But I enjoy it... mostly. I- huh... never watch Fate/Silent Night series so I'm not familiar with the characters. And will Jaune ever attend to enter the Academy? You could always say he run away from his... Kings? And family. It kinda match the originally story of Rwby. But its your Story and I really have no saying. Umm- good luck on the next chapter. I won't add this story on favorite, at least not yet. Not until I this right. But I wil follow |
Silver Prima chapter 1 . 9/6/2018 This will be a very awkward moment for Jaune. But its funny... so far. |
martinm95 chapter 4 . 7/29/2018 When will he get to Beacon? Don't get me wrong, the fic is pretty good, but it doesn't feel like a RWBY fic without beacon and the canon characters (RWBY, JNPR, etc.) And reading about a bunch of OCs (Jaune's family) react to and interact with Jaune's harem of masters is nowhere nearly as interesting and fun as reading about actual established RWBY characters react to and interact with them. Also, one suggestion: genderbent Cu Alter the mad dog king. Genderbent Sakata Kintoki too. |
drumstick95 chapter 7 . 5/12/2018 This is a pretty cool story |
Bibliotheca Mundi chapter 8 . 4/23/2018 I've been reading this on my off time during the last few days, and I have to say, I have enjoyed this immensely. I can't say there is any deep or intricate plot, because if there is it flew over my head, but the story and characters are enjoyable and fun to read. A simple and enjoyable story. Of course, considering the fact that everyone that has appeared from fate now has been genderbent only makes it so, much, sweeter. I'll definitely be looking forward to the next update, whenever that may be. Good luck further on, in writing or other places. tl;dr: Is good stuff man, real good. |
Cadaver1041 chapter 8 . 4/22/2018 I’m actually having some fun with this. Wasn’t expecting much but it’s pretty good. |
Sandaime Hokage chapter 8 . 4/7/2018 Really interesting fic so far, looking forward to reading more |