There's no such thing as a late chapter Amber. And it's completely okay to not be satisfied with what you have. You don't have to force yourself to stick to a schedule, you just write the way you want. I'm an aspiring author and I have whole pages I don't like and I rewrite them at least a dozen times over the course of several weeks. I really like this story and I want to see what your beautiful mind comes up with next. Keep going.

You don't have to force yourself to stick to a schedule Amber, and it's completely okay to not be satisfied with what you write. I'm an aspiring author and I occasionally have whole pages I don't like and constantly have to rewrite at least a dozen times over the span of several weeks. You just write the way you want, I really like this story so I will be waiting patiently for what your beautiful mind brings out. Keep going.

Don't worry about the writing, you're great. You're adding depth to the characters instead merely making them into caricatures of themselves, which I have sadly seen done too often in fanfiction. Its refeshing. And Far as the update schedule, just do what you feel comfortable with _

Honestly, you're a lot better at writing than you're giving yourself credit for. Really, just by doing it, you get sooo much better than when you started. Keep on writing! :D

Amber: I have been reading for almost 30 years and read everything from one end of the spectrume to the other... I have also read a lot of authors her on this site CalitaRael and Desert Sunrise just to name a couple and while your chapters aren't as long as what they have written yours is still well written and I am very much looking forward to what comes out of your wonderful mind next

I got to agree this very well written i hope you continue with this

If this is bad at writing then I'm at a loss. This fanfic was really well written and I could feel Blakes anxiety and fear as my own. Very few people have been able to do that. You don't give yourself enough credit. I love what you have so far and I hope your relationship gets better. Writing is therapeutic to some people and I'm glad you were able to find a healthy outlet. Here's to seeing more from you. Keep going.