Good start. Keep going.

I enjoyed that far more than I first intercepted, absolutely love the characters and you even brought Rika :D
Great job, would love to read more!

This looks very interesting. Would be nice if you'd continue it. Knowing that Zoro rarely speaks a lot about his crew so this is nice.

beautiful! hopefully you will continue this one... the concept of looking at them or analysing them from an outsiders pov is good and very rare in the fandom... keep it up...

beautiful, really beautiful...you should continue it

this is amazing please continue

THIS was beautiful and amazing and the fact that the waitress was Rika shouldn't have came as a surprise but it still made me almost cry. She was perfect, so perfect, and her and the other small nods to the straw hats journey in the east blue was more than welcomed.

I think you did Zoro so much justice with how he reacted and what his own motivations with talking to people were and OMG the fact that he had THE HAT RIGHT THERE.

You built the OCs well and diverse enough to each have their own interests that brought out different aspects of the straw hat crew and zoro himself, which was nice and well done. It added more fullness not only to the writing, but the crew of pirates you chose to put into the story
My head canon is luffy isn't actually dead and I'm sticking with it sorrynotsorry (though really, what other end is most befitting of him?)

I await your next chapter

I really like it !

It's a nice story, but i really don't know if you should continue it or not. However I'd like to see more of this story.

you have to continue this i want to know more about luffy to haha even though i know XD we must know more

Personally, i would really like this story to cpntinue! I know what you feel about the outsider perspective thing. I think its really interseting what normal pirates think of the strawhats and it would also be fun to see how they react to the Strawhats story. If you do continue it, you should have Zoro travel around with the pirates for a while. That could make a great possible plot. Maybe they meet some other Strawhats too? About Tegaru's crew, i dont like Tegaru, but i do like Katherine and Isidoro. Katherine reminds me of Nami and Robin, while Isidoro reminds me of Ussop and Luffy. I especially like Isidoro. He seems like a sweet guy. Something i really like is how you didnt make it that Tegaru's crew (if you do continue you should really give them a name) wasent amazing and perfect. That zoro didnt instantly like fall on love with them or something and tell them all about One Piece. You made them seem like normal, real people. Anyways enough of my rambling. Usually i would fo through and fix mu mistakes in my reviews but its like 4 am and im very tired. Sorry if this review is weird and makes no sense cuz like i said, 4am. I really shpuld get to sleep now. Bye! And sorry for rambling. Okay no really bye!

oh this is really good, i hope more is coming.
i love these future ones with the old crew still around
awesomeness

How do I feel? Ive always loved fanfics about /after/! When the Strawhats are legends, and at the very top! And yes, unknowing POVs are the best to read when well-written. A main element in One Piece is the element of surprise and unexpected events. I don't know if you should continue or leave it at that, and I love the fact that Zoro's back to where all of it began...a humble bar in Shells Town with a girl named Rika.

Maybe you could publish something like...

"And then he told him. Recounting impossible things, incredible things, an adventure had that would inspire millions if it hadn't done so already. To think it began so simple, Isidoro thought. A boy in a boat with a crazy dream, fighting pirate clowns to corrupt marine captains, Sky Islands kilometers into the sky and Fishmen Island kilometers underwater. Isidoro was glued to his seat, imagining the things this lagendary man had described.

Rika shook her head with a smile, noting Zoro's subtle excited glint as he retold what was basically his life story. It happens very rarely that someone asks about the man named Monkey D. Luffy.

The rest of Isidoro's crew that had come with him were also captivated by the forbidden story, one that the World Government was trying so hard to erase."

and then my mind goes blank. But something like that could be a good finisher to this. Man...I typed too much. But that's just a testament to just how much your writing just inspired me.

Really interesting! Keep up the great work, and I really hope to maybe see the other Straw Hats (if they're all alive) pop up too!