This was just so darn cute, I loved it! Plus you're writing style is great which made it even more enjoyable to read ;)

OK... I just reviewed on your Superman story and admitted there (that I loved it!) that I was normally more into some Marvel (at least movie-Marvel) characters... well, here you hit two of my favorites right on. Again, wow. I love the rhythm of the narration, matching the dialogue... matching the rhythm and pattern of Logan's thoughts. Also I can really hear their voices. Poignant and meaningful.

A great story. Very good.

Excellant.

Awesome, sweet little story. Good work.

Very good. Short, sweet, and simple. Yet entirely satisfying. Of course, I wouldn't be one to complain if you continued it ;)

This is wonderful! Lovely, nonromantic interaction between Logan and Marie. Very touching!

Wow! I like this story a lot! It's so realistic! I can actually picture Marie and Logan saying those words! I do hope you update soon!

~Neola

Great story! IS there going to be more

Very sweet. And very well written. Thanks for sharing.

OMG that was so good you should continue it

That was a truely lovely story. i just finished watching the movie (for the one hundred billionth ) i think you did well to keep them in character. bravo.

Well? That was great! Is there more? If so, I can't wait! But I love it as is.

~Yamiko~

I hope you write more. It isn't too often that you come across a Rogue/Logan story that is just plain good. It's nice to read about them just being human.

Have you read the book "A Day In The Life of Ivan Denisovich"? Like this fic, it just goes through what happens in a small amount of time during the war at a political camp. This reminded me of that book - it seems to be just a normal, bland, everyday thing, but when you look closer, there's something to it. Some significance that can be easily overlooked. I liked how it ended so simply. It's not very often that you find fics like this, without grand or verbose endings. I'm absolutely lovin' it.