i am blushing so hard they didn't even do M rated stuff but somehow it was still so freakin hot ahhhh

Damn it I wanted more! This was great!

Now that was definitely sexy Lucy pining Natsu

yay! I LOVE this idea! Why is Lucy and Natsu sparring together SO sexy?

Really enjoyed reading this one, thank you for this story!

Heck, yes. 10/10

omyxnidnzjxnskzmosnxusnziemid! omygosh! Is it just me or is it getting hot in here? whew. . hahaha. I really love how you both made them so competitive and just how Natsu initiated the kiss! Omygoodness! Is it bad that I wanted more? hahahhahahah... Beautifully done and I had fun reading this fic. Hoping for more stories from you.

Yeah, sexy it was indeed :D

Go those two the good thing that Happy was not to interrupt the moment!

Damn that was soooo awesome! ! I loved the idea of natsu teaching lucy some hand to hand combat it's really cool! And of course so sexy! I really really loved your writing style too and the you presented my most favorite character in the whole series (natsu of course )! I'm so looking forward to reading more amazing story's from you in the future! Take care!

That was very very very well done. I actually like how she tried and failed to ssdu e him the first time. it's so much more like Natsu to be overwhelmed because she was kicking ass than trying some trick. Very natural and believable, especially if this takes place post Alvarez, when their tension is ridiculously high. one of the few one shots that don't leave you wanting more. it grasp a moment and feeling perfectly.

Cheers,
satyrykal

HOT DAMN. You got me on the edge of my seat man. Can we have a part two please?

One, I have to agree with you in that Nalu would be canon after the Phantom Lord arc if I owned Fairy Tail.

Two, this was really cute, and it seems so like them!

Please continue please

Also I think natsu gets turned on when Lucy fights

This is how I would imagine they make the next move. I think he's been waiting for her to fight him passionately. Well done!