| Reviews for On The Tip Of Your Tongue, At The Back Of Your Lungs |
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Fairondale chapter 15 . 12/6/2019 This story is so good...it makes me sad, seeing the Strawhats sad over things that happened in their past lives. coughAcecough But seeing them happy and reunited is a gift, the Strawhat crew, Luffy and his brothers, Ace and the Whitebeard pirates. I also think you wrote everyone really well! All of their quirks and hijinks are shown, and it is just really good. :) I wonder what will happen if they ever reach Luffy's strawhat. Will they finally remember? Luffy will finally know why his chest hurts sometimes. |
Matt chapter 15 . 11/15/2019 Update! |
VampireApple chapter 10 . 11/11/2019 Okay, the fact that Marco is the only one to really remember, and why he's the only one is pretty cool. I'm really glad Ace found his people. |
VampireApple chapter 9 . 11/11/2019 Its interesting to read Robin's perspective, which I assume is close to yours. |
VampireApple chapter 8 . 11/9/2019 Hello Robin! I think its cool that Nami found her. |
VampireApple chapter 6 . 11/8/2019 Wow, what a chapter. I liked the little part with Zoro and Luffy, and how Luffy can read him best, with Nami almost there. |
VampireApple chapter 5 . 11/8/2019 I really loved this chapter. There were so many good moments between the characters. I love how Jinbi and Zoro sprayed a meat smell to attracted Luffy, and how Jinbi just went long with the piggy back ride. And Franky is so cool! I love the detail you put into him. And Everything with Ace, very good. |
VampireApple chapter 4 . 11/8/2019 Welcome to the family, Franky! |
VampireApple chapter 3 . 11/8/2019 Of course the Straw Hatd would go off exploring in a flood, and of course Franky would save them good chapter. |
VampireApple chapter 2 . 11/7/2019 Very interesting! I line how Jinve came in before Robin, Franky or Brook. Is Ace going to find his crew then? |
VampireApple chapter 1 . 11/7/2019 This is a really cool idea. I love modern reincarnation fics, and this one is a little more unique. |
Kadek8785 chapter 9 . 4/29/2019 Ture. The world is fucked up, mainly for the people who resident in it. But we just have to remembere, that the main reasons are because we failed to choose the right leader, that we failed to teach the right thing, that everyone sdeserved their fredoom. We have to remember, that most countries are build like that, that they are also the victims of them more ancient countries. That in the end, we all the victims of those dimwits that called themself great people, that live so long ago and teach us many great things but can't really tood us clearly just so we can understand it better. For even if they trully gifted us with something great, we just can't really understand it. Because no matter how 'smart' we are, we are still stupid in reality. |
Kadek8785 chapter 8 . 4/29/2019 So... Robin live in Indonesia? Never though Robin would live in my home country. |
clipboardfox22 chapter 15 . 9/6/2018 Wow, what an amazing fic! I love it so much! I know that the world is unfair and the people in charge are fucking horrible monsters, but please don't wear yourself out. There's a passage in the Talmud that goes (I'm paraphrasing) "Don't be overwhelmed by the cruelty of the world. Do good now, love others now, fight injustice now. You don't have to solve all the world's problems, but at the same time you can't leave it for the next generation." Keeping informed and fighting when and where you can is enough. If you ever want to talk, I will always lend a listening ear. |
Chestnut Zahard chapter 15 . 7/25/2018 I read all of this in one go - one of my favourite reincarnation fics so far. Aha, as a fellow Australian a lot of the references were so relateable. Since you mentioned Luna Park and Questacon...a fellow Sydney-dweller? Glad to know there are other OP fans near me, I can never get any of my friends into it. Thanks a lot for the chapters, it made my day! I hope you keep it up! |