I completely cried reading this chapter. You did NOT disappoint with Yoko and Akane's backstory. The one thing I noticed is that the final scene between Yoko and Akane are different in the middle and at the end of the chapter. The first one, Akane says goodbye while in the second one, she kisses him and says "You earned it." Wonderful work. I'll be re-reading this several times to get the full emotional impact of it.

I just found this story and I love it! I hope to read more soon.

aw man, Kurama is so dumb sometimes. I hope nobody jumps them while he's weak or recovering

There’s something really wrong with this Ken character.

Awesome story. I noticed a few grammar errors in this chapter, though.

Yaaas our duo is on their own case while the others are rescuing Yukina! Please let Ran become Kina's fearless protector

I just finished this story, and i must say this is really good story. I like Ran and i like her interaction with many other people. I like to read how she grow. Also when Ken passed away, it was really sad, and i am glad that Ran was able to slowly heal. You have created a great story with great character! Great job!
But i think you need to recruit beta to fix some word. When i read this, sometime i get confused because of the wrong word. But overall, this is still good story. Keep it up!

You wrote a new chapter yeeeees! I know all too much about lack of inspiration, and I am soooo happy you overcame it with this fic. I re-read it a couple of weeks ago and you posted a new chapter! I have to say I loved this one. Ran healing from losing Ken and getting her shit together was great. Kurama as a sadistic tutor is definitely something I could see happen. Also the hug was just...ah. He has to be in love with her. He has to. And the sleeve part was hilarious really. Also Hiei protecting Rans dreams is so cute and everyone was trying to help and the seak peek? You have a sneak peek?! Now I must know what happens next. Please, please, please, update soon.

Awesomeness:3 thank you for the new chapter:3

I have binged this story all day and it is absolutely beautiful. I was thinking earlier that if you didn't have a beta, I would love to be your beta for you. I'm busy with work and stuff but this needs to be proofread so it can be the absolute best. This has been a blessing to read for me.

I looove it. It was so freaking sad to watch Ran go through all that. She still has a long journey in front of her. She is so brave and so devouted to all she does. I hope only good things will come her way. I love how she interacts with everyone just showing their characters the way they really were in the anime and not OC. Thank you for this :)

I’ve only read 9 chapters so far. And I’m honestly looking forward to reading the rest at the same time I’m not. I suppose it’s because of some spelling and grammar issues as well as some repetitive parts. My advice is probably double checking your work. It may sound tedious but it’ll do wonders and attract more readers.

Besides those small issues, this fanfic isn’t half bad. I more or less look forward to reading the rest of the chapters.

New chapter please...

So sad! Great update and I look forward to the next one.

This was a really amazing chapter. I felt for Ran so much. This is how I felt a lot of times when a loved one died like the whole world was broken or upside down.

You did a really great making the characters believable. I liked you added and Keiko and now a Yusuke's Pov too. And Kurama and Ran? What can I ask there moments are very well written and full of honest feeling and life.

Great chapter. Update soon, please 3