Oh come on, come on come on come on! Please, please please pretty please do update soonnnn... please...

This is definitely one of the best fan fictions I've ever read, you're an extremely talented writer! Please update soon

it’s 1 o’clock in the morning and i need to be awake in like five hours but GOSH DANG THIS WAS GOOD AND TOTALLY WORTH IT THANK U FOR BLESSING ME WITH THIS IM VERY EXCITED FOR WHAT COMES NEXT

Ahhhhhh this is so so so so so good. I need more and more and more. I love it!

Loved how they all - not so discreetly - left Ed and her alone! Oh siblings...
And yay! They kissed before she had to leave, and it was so sweet, beautifully written!
I know there's not much background on the history of the Golden Age but I do like how you kept the giant conflict in , well researched! I just hope the situation with the Giants calms down Peter seems so tired, he deserves a break. (Though if you need a new conflict I know I'm the books the Pevensies have some trouble from Calormen, which would be an interesting angle- after their trip of course, like I said they could use the holiday)
Here's where the begging starts: Please update soon, even if it's just a short chapter. Personally I prefer short frequent chapters as opposed to long chapters but longer waits between updates (but in the end it is utterly up at you as a writer) I absolutely adore your work and am literally on the edge of my seat waiting for more! Especially after that line where Peter mentions a certain question Ed might be asking soon - what a tease! I'm dying, I need more!

Wow, just wow. There is so much detail in this chapter from the negotiations and battle with the Giants to the memorial, I can't imagine how much time you spent on this -and it really paid off. Also the names of the Giants and other narnian characters must have taken some time to think up as well. Great great work!

So many good lines in this chapter!
"He is a wonderful king ... always was, from the very minute the crown was put on his head."
And at the end when Susan asked if she could love her brother and her response was "I think I already do." LOVE IT! And of course let's not forget the brotherly banter! Well done!

I LOVE THIS! it was sweet as he opened up to her but it had just enough heat (like when she's admiring his body and looking at his scars) great addition with the whole "wound came from magic so even the cordial couldn't fully heal it" very creative!

YES YES YES! So many of my favourite stories have been updated this week! I am still very much enjoying this wonderful story!
I am so glad everyone made it back safely (even if Peter is very grumpy) and I am off to re read Terebinthian Sun as well!
OH MY GOODNESS! Finally! Have I mentioned how much I love Ed and Medeha together? I'm so glad they kissed before she had to return home and I cannot wait for the story to continue! I will be eagerly awaiting the next up date! :-)
Cheers,
A

Just as I mentioned in my review for What Happened at Farford, please pardon the shortness of this review. Internet is being a stupid bastard. Viruses bombarding me with nasty advertisements literally every half a minute.

I echo every single gushing review for this. THANK YOU for not getting Medeha kidnapped like Oreius said last chapter! Thank you that they're going on a vacation and that she and Ed will likely have a SPLENDID time getting to know each other more! Thank you for this beautiful chapter! Heck, thank you even for grumpy Peter! He's so cute when he's so close to chomping Ed's head off for no reason whatsoever! :D More Grumpy!Peter please! So adorable!

AHHHHH! But I could do with some "WARNING: Contains extreme sweetness between two lovely young people. It can make you so absolutely giddy and happy your heart will pop like a balloon" at the beginning! AHHHHHH!

I really should get to reading Teribinthian Sun soon!

.TION! You are my romance hero at the moment, Coopergirl! :)

OH MY GOODNESS. I saw that kiss coming but still... asdfghjklasdfghjkl

Great update! I liked the views of all the Pevensies in this, and I enjoyed the tie in to Terebinthian Sun!

I love this chapter! Especially the kiss!

To quote your own review to my story: Indeed, you made us wait. But it was well worth it. :) Nothing like an impromptu battle with the Ettins giants and Edmund very nearly getting crushed by the fallen fiend to send my heart in a frenzy! Of course Peter was there to push him out of the way, no doubt narrowly escaping being squashed himself. *Shakes my head fondly at our amazing Pevensie boys*

AHHH! Oreius! As much as that needed to be said, now I feel bad for poor Edmund. Crossing my fingers that no kidnapping of a certain Terebinthian lady shall take place as they set out for their journey home - although if it does come to that, I can see the allure of adventure and heroic Edmund, too. Still, I'd much prefer a quiet, intimate time between the two - like the one they'd shared after Edmund took the cordial and began opening up about his past. I really loved that. It was intimate and special. :D

Aww! Poor Medeha feeling out of place among the four sovereigns. But I have a blissful feeling that she won't be for long, in one way or another (one way being remarkably romantic for sure!). :D Edmund whispering how glad he was of her presence sent me into a violently giddy fit. Oh, my goodness! What have you done, Coopergirl? I used to have a bit of an aversion to romance (not that I mind, since I love Ed and Medeha together).

Brilliant comeback chapter for this story - as expected from an author of your talent! :D I really hope this gets updated soon (and by that, I mean this story AND WHAF :D). There's so much bonding and growing as a couple to be seen between Ed and Med! :D

Blessings,
Valiant

P.S.
Thank you so much for your kind words for my story! It still feels so unreal to have someone as talented as you - someone I look up to here - reading and commenting on my work. :D I really appreciate you taking the time! Every single one of your reviews fill me with pride and joy. :D

Ahhhhhhh, this is so good!
I love your writing style, and you stick well and true to the characters whilst also giving them each more Narnian and more grown characteristics at the same time. This is easily one of the best works I've read on this site, and I can't see what you come up with next. Good luck, and happy writing!