I cringed bc of this:

when writing, people speaking in it go like this:

“bla bla bla” said a random person.
“bla bla oooo” said another.
“oooooo bla bla” they said together

(Yeah.. I know.. OK I DIDNT KNOW WHAT THEY WERE SPEAKING BOUT)

instead of:

“Bla bla” said someone. “Bla ooo” said another. “Yeet” yelped another.

add a line before each speaker
Sorry, I needed to point it out :/

But good story I do admit :)

thats adorable

love it and dagur is the best character ever so many options for fanfictions dont you think your amazing and chapter count your almost at 200

A couple of ideas:
Ruffnut and Tuffnut play a prank on Toothless involving a spider.
How did Toothless and a Whispering Death develop a grudge with each other?

Do you take requests? If so, could you write a one-shot where Hiccup gets bit by this dragon and it's venom can change it's gender which weakens them? And then have Hiccup try to hide it from everyone? Thank you.

The last dialogue between Stoick and Hiccup , It was perfect, I really loved that and all the situation.

It was a chapter full of emotions and a real roller coaster ride. No wonder Hiccup wanted to continue and Zahnlos only tried to protect him so that he could get the rest he needed. But unfortunately most of the villagers don't see it.

this one was so cute! Happy snoggletog.

nice chapter. But that's how it is when you prepare everything shortly beforehand and it almost ends in disaster.

Good chapter, as always.( I don't know what a CNA is) but Congratulations!

A great story. Especially when Toothless Hiccup helped to relax in his warmth of the wing and forget his pain. Toothless is simply the best friend you can have because he knows what to do.

Have you realized that you are getting better at writing, well I did realize that and I'm so proud of you :) . Really if ya compare your first fanfic to this you'll be wowed. Great job I liked this chapter so much and I liked it's idea too . Hope to see more chapters soon :)

It was sooo perfect as always, I really love when Stoick takes care of Hiccup; I really enjoyed this one, you could continue with this idea, I don't know maybe when the others Riders come back to Berk to check Hiccup. Well t's just one Idea "Midnight Scrum" is one of my favorites chapters. Greetings.

this was honestly the most beautiful things i've seen in a while...

Could you please explain one thing to me? What is Child Development Class? I've never heard of it before I started reading your stories and you mention it in almost every modern AU you write.