Reviews for Jump City's Saiyan
Borello chapter 7 . 9/5
the story is really good. i hoped to read more chapter.
DarkChaosDragon00 chapter 1 . 7/5
me personally would have switched Starfire for Ravager.
thegrison chapter 1 . 6/25
This is NOT a Naruto crossover. You could easily change "Naruto" with any guy and the story would not change. That makes it a Non Naruto crossover. You really need to understand what makes a crossover a crossover.
A Simple Library chapter 7 . 6/23
Please! Raven is so cute.
avjuan37 chapter 7 . 5/3
please make more chapters
Danirodriguez1995 chapter 7 . 4/17
Continue with the story? It is very interesting, do not give up
K3YBLADEK1NG chapter 5 . 4/16
Holy Water Mode Activate
mothefcking oak chapter 7 . 4/10
Hey man great story! I really enjoyed reading it! Can't wait for the next chapter.
robert krause chapter 6 . 4/5
when Naruto had get back home for when he had money to get his own books shop open up for when selling off books and others stuff too , Naruto then made it up to the top now and get to buy out a house he keep for black fire and him own used now, when the men cave office is for his others workings like spy and find his new super saiyan powers to used too, he took out some power rings the black red l when terra was one of them Naruto and beast boy be focer to took out her power ring and doing it now she now back into the gave mad it them now , when beast boy cry for when Naruto was now think of it now put the power ring awry now , when Naruto had the green one now and Jinx get the star j, now.
robert krause chapter 2 . 4/5
why not let black fire batgirl star fire rave and super girl do the mo bikes ,and beast boy and Naruto and cyborg were the low r, cars both 1973 to 1988 cars , or van like beast boy had star wars to his van and cyborg had his car and Naruto get a car as well , when robin had his own car too, as for Naruto was in south a he took out big time hit men and then the boss a mob one out and took the money too , used it buy a ware house out the inn red lights out , his home now , sir this not span you to help out sir Robert Krause , as for the girls had the m bikes , and boys had low rights cars or vans , sir , was cool too,
Guest chapter 7 . 4/4
Esta buenisimo ojala lo puedas seguir
Gamma-X chapter 7 . 2/2
Can you *please* stop adding any more girls to the harem? You're going to make it a giant clusterfuck eventually. I don't remember Bumblebee, but Terra really *should* be with Beast Boy after everything in the Teen Titans cartoon that aired around 15 years ago. I love Terra, don't get me wrong, but BEAST BOY MAH MAN! They *really* had a thing going on that could've *worked!* ;-;

So, I *hope* you'll stop adding any more girls to the harem since he has *enough* girls and that you'll consider changing your mind about Bee Girl and Terra. Just... *PLEASE.*

Anyways, good chapter! I didn't know you played Something Unlimited too! :D
Please keep up the good work! And, sorry about your situation dude. I don't really know what to say tbh... So, I'll just leave it with the usual ending;

Ja Ne~!
Gamma-X chapter 6 . 2/2
..I want Terra to be back with Beast Boy! COME ON~! THEY DESERVE IT! ;-;
Also, you forgot Kole's age at the end of this chapter. And I was hoping Jinx would have gone with Cyborg, rather than bee girl. Although, that may just be me because of *some* memories I can recall from childhood *and* ZoneToons' animation with those two. XD
Bee Girl with Cyborg just basically seems like the DC version of Ant Man with Wasp (was that her name?) in Marvel (I think it was Marvel... I always get confused between the two). Sooo, yeah.

Do you respond to reviews? Who knows. Maybe I'll find out next time~
Anyways, good chapter and keep up the good work! I love how you're building up the relationships and I simply *can't* wait for when Raven *finally* comes into the fold! :D

Ja Ne~!
SelenetheNerd chapter 7 . 1/22
I loved this
Chue19 chapter 7 . 11/22/2019
I freaking love this story .
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