Ugh negan...love your story, trust you where you take it!

Love love them together. Can't wait for more

Omg more. Love it

The slap heard around the world ! Lol love your story great job

Omfg! Bring on protective daryl!

Sitting on the edge of my seat because I'm seeing a hug and tears coming and I am so excited for what comes next!

good beginning, looking forward to see more :)

I am enjoying your story very much and can't wait to find out what happens next - I love 'drama' e.g. a jealous Carol or some feelings of disappointment that the 'family' left her, etc. - hope maybe you decide to have a little drama. But, you are a fine writer so whatever direction you take, its going to be a great tale. Good job

Oh man, you can't leave it there! I need a reunion! I need a hug and tears and a happy ending!

Can't wait to see the reunion!

great start please update soon