| Reviews for Type Earth Revised |
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Daniel xros chapter 1 . 4/11 I need more |
AJGuardian chapter 1 . 3/9 That would make him younger than me. I liked where you went with this iteration. I hope you can manage this one. |
Iamnothere12 chapter 1 . 1/21 Awesome start hope you keep it going |
Naruto009523 chapter 1 . 1/15 Well glad to see this story again looking forward to seeing where it goes and hopefully you will continue to the end this time. So keep up the good work looking forward to reading the next chapter when it has been posted. |
Warehouse1 chapter 1 . 1/17 Interesting story hope to see more; I don't mind that you changed Harry's birth to 1991 but he wasn't born in 81, his parents died in Oct 31 1981 but he was born 15 months prior(July 31 1980) |
kazutoayoma chapter 1 . 1/16 Good story how you mixed dc FMA and Naruto i really like it please update soon |
shypunk chapter 1 . 1/15 i like it keep it up |
Hideyoshi Fujiyoshi chapter 1 . 1/15 Jolly good chapter my friend. The pace is rather fast but not undesirable grammars and words are written well making me vision the story like a video using imagination and properly written words. Gonna expect more from you good sir like my favorite author Sir. DarkWolfShiro stories that i can't wait and anticipate. |
RikudoNaruto1 chapter 3 . 10/20/2018 To many thing all mashed together just do a simple op naruto who enters into the potter verse nice and simple. Don't give him other peoples powers he has plenty of his own, it doesn't need to be rewritten over and over again neither do you need to mix all these element together it just makes everything overly complicated and unnecesary. An actual chapter would be nice to read it's been over a year and nothings really changed. The only thing bringing me back is the chance of Naruto x Tonks at this point tbh. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2018 Is this the newest rewrite? the same time as the latest AN? I don't want Naruto to be reborn, just go with this one, but I also want and like him as authority figure though.. just go on write another chapter.. |
Mr.Heller chapter 1 . 10/16/2018 Nah, this will never work properly, literature is like cuisine, it's an art, but there's a science to it. What you have - is a bowl of shit, because you mashed together too much incompatible ingredients. |
Generic - wryteR chapter 2 . 10/14/2018 nice, please , keep telling us what else your thinking of doing and what other changes you are planing on making. i'd hate to have to read them in a story, oh wait, i''m sorry , my bad, of coarse i wouldn't read about it, this story wont go that far anyway... what is important about this anyway... honestly not 2 chapters in and less than 9000 words and you already have a plot breaking retcon in mind... jeez my advice to you is. delete this story, and just write what you want to write, not about what you intend to write |
Immortal ninjaaa chapter 2 . 10/13/2018 Its a shame your not going with this, the premise is interesting, an all powerful god naruto who can travel dimensions and stuff. |
biob1 chapter 1 . 5/9/2018 Great job |
Forgottenkami chapter 2 . 3/19/2018 Can Naruto not get the typical SHAZAM powers? I feel like he should get his own unique set of powers with him calling out something like KURAMA, RIKUDO, SENNIN, SHINOBI, you know something related with his history. For instance if you choose the SHINOBI option it could be S for Shiva, H for Hagoromo, I for Indra, N for...Nyx(?), O for Odin, B for Balor, and I for Isis. I was just spit balling with the names. Though if you do think about using this idea, I suggest KURAMA |