| Reviews for The Innocent Sin and The Angelic Demon |
|---|
   Sinner.0 chapter 1 . 1/31 What kind of writing is this. Had potential until I read this first chapter |
| MOONECLIPSEHQ chapter 32 . 9/15/2019 *sips tealiterally) |
| Guest chapter 32 . 8/15/2019 I have read both original and this version and i must say that both are good, some things i liked more in old version but this one is good too |
| Kritzel chapter 11 . 6/23/2019 I haven't completed reading yet. Adrien is coming off as abusive, obsessive psycho till now. I know it is supposed to be a dark/drama/rom fiction. It's set on an interesting AU. Inspite of that I'm not fond of Chat's vibe time to time and I found Marinette frustrating too- at some points anyway. I mean at that chapter when she was wondering why was he hated after she finished reading about him, I couldn't help but feel like 'duh?' Isn't it obvious? Oof. I'll go back to reading it. lol. It's still your story, so keep doing what you do and do keep writing! |
| Chat-and-ladybug chapter 32 . 6/14/2019 What do you mean for now? I’m just saying that I thought that the original was amazing but this is even better! I just wanted to congratulate you on writing something this magnificent (though a little bit dark at times) and am really glad I read it. To be honest it was so similar at the start that I thought in the end Emile turned up alive and well and the Akuma flourishing... I’m VERY glad that I kept reading... Thank you soooo much for writing this Miraculous story and stay Amazing! |
| Ariana chapter 32 . 5/21/2019 Loved it! Please do the next part quick Love you kikkie |
| Guest chapter 18 . 5/5/2019 Isn't Chloe and adrien cousins or something...damn and i love both ideas of Marinette and Alyas ideas about chloe |
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/3/2019 Don't tell me there's gonna be lukanette |
| MysticAngel818 chapter 5 . 3/13/2019 Oh shit |
| delaney chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 oo an affair |
| marichatalltheway9 chapter 1 . 2/22/2019 this is like the 4th time I've read the story and I love it just as much as I loved it the first time |
| marichatalltheway9 chapter 1 . 2/22/2019 I absolutely love stories like these. I can totally see Adrian as someone who would be crazy. |
| Lila Vey chapter 32 . 2/8/2019 This story was one of the best yet. I love it |
| Jemlolirocktoyz chapter 9 . 12/7/2018 Awww my kittens back,want some help murdering the mean man kitten I'd happy to help,I've been listening to dark shit and I'd even gather some fan girls to help, we'll have lots of fun! |
| Jemlolirocktoyz chapter 8 . 12/7/2018 WHO IS THIS!? THIS IS NOT MY KITTEN! ok well maybe he's still my sweet lovable silly dorky naughty little kitten. But yeah he's a bit fucked up but then again isn't everyone plus who the fuck is his "special client" is it that fanboy from season2 episode11? Mon pauvre chaton was it his fucking perve of a grandfather grooooooossssss |
