Wow seeing them both beat themselves up this chapter was a painful read. My heart kept clenching. Job well done, author! XD

"Imrahil pensively set down the platter he was holding, silently staring at his plate. At length, he said, "Erchirion—""

Oh but this bit made me laugh. Poor Erchirion! Great warrior in his own right but still mostly called upon by his father in understanding the youngest sibling of their family! (Haha and I don't even begin to feel bad for Amrothos being dragged all over the kingdom at the whim of his little sister)

I've been tearing through this fic. I really appreciate how slow the romance is to start in your stories! It gives the pacing so much credit. Thank you for sharing your work, I've really been enjoying it.

An enjoyable story! The rescue of Lothiriel and meeting Eomer and Eothain was a fine idea. You wrote nicely her emotions through her ordeal and later as the trauma was still raw. I like your portrayal of Eothain was his role in befriending Lothiriel and bugging Eomer was very good. Her stay in Edoras and the forming of relationships was wonderful. It is fortunate they managed to resolve their misunderstanding and the awkwardness, along with their stubborness, to finally be together. Her efforts to gather aid for Rohan were admirable.

Beautiful story! I stayed up all night to read it!

I greatly enjoyed your story! I just discovered this LoTR fanfiction group and am having fun delving into it. Glad to see Eomer having a chance to lighten up betimes. Carry on!

Beautiful story. Thank you for sharing...

Lovely story! I wanted to kick Eomer's arse for that rubbish he pulled. He can take that foolish pride and eat it with boiled cabbage-*after* he apologizes long and hard to sweet Thiri!

Thank you for a wonderful fic.

What a capable lady Lothiriel is!I loved Eomer's reactions!

An epilogue with the birth of Elfwine was just what was needed to wrap this up. Beautiful.

I'm so pleased you got round to this - had to grin at Eomer being so sure it was a son and Betersel unconsciously accepting the assumption.

Lia

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First of allI'm a dudeSecondGod bless you, that was sweet as honey. Sorry for being a troublemaker here, but I believe my demands were justified by deep and profound needI cannot thank you enough. Cheers

I loved Lothiriel's dealings with the Dwarves.

Aragorn is very wise in his advice to Eomer. I hope Eomer will take Eothain's advice next.