Fuck you asshole. Did you witness your mother sucking and fucking half the neighborhood, so you gotta "flex" your pathetically miniscule ego and faggotass edgy bullshit in this fic? Like your father, Jiraiya is a sad sack of fail who wanks off to women in hotsprings.

No wonder your mother prays you die. The two-cent cunt fucks anything on two legs in the hopes of conceiving a better something than whatever the fuck you turned out to be. And your limpdick father sits in a corner and diddles himself.

Go kill yourself. Trash like you is better left in the sewage.

This entire story is Naruto ranting about how he's better than everyone and they should feel like shit for ignoring him. Another trash neglect fic to add to the pile.

Your naruto is the most annoying fuck i ever read. If i was his parents i would have drowned him already

Just thought of this last night how are Naruto and his sister communicating in their mind is it through the shared seal or are both halves of the kyubi merging in the seal

oh this is good I look forward to seeing if he will bang his sister

LMFAOOOOOOO, I can't. I feel bad for Naruko, I'll pray for her.

Round of applause for the Toad Sage! I've always hated stories bashing Jiraiya to the extreme because unlike Kakashi (though he did have his quirks), he actually trained him and spent time getting to know him as a person and as a ninja.

I wonder if Tsunade knows about Naruto's childhood and Minato's shady business deals and who side she'll take?

Is Haku not with Zabuza, or did I miss something?

BTW, The spin with Satsuki was brilliant.

did you abandon this?

Nice story so far and seems Orochimaru is still clueless that the last uchiha well the one he wants his dead anyways keep up the great work!

Well that was an entertaining chapter Naruto betting on the matches and nice kill totally deserved it

Well that was interesting I can't believe you're planning on killing off Sakura and Ino though that sux 2 of my fav characters I hope she faces Naruto and he kills her cuts her down like the pathetic slut she is

Well written, for the most part, but I can't currently stand the forgiveness shtick.

this started off ok but for awhile it seems like you are just adding whatever pops into your head. no real consistency amongst the plot, characters, interactions, etc. i like your stories in general but i'm afraid you lost me on this one. sorry.

Well this was rather amusing plus a Giant bunny getting freaky with a Bear that's a new one

Listen if your gonna change a characters gender give them a reason to be genderbent dont just kill them it literally would had been the same thing if you made sasuke male