Please write more

This chapter is very hard to read. I would go though it and delete the extra words that seem to be throw in randomly.

LOVE :)

Confusing but good. Well done.

I like it

love it please write more

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Uh, I think this is great. Will there be romance between Harry and someone else? Another, won't people notice that he's a mini-James with Lily's eyes? Er, why is it NOT, like, REALLY bad that he's, I dunno... COVERED IN BLOOD? I mean, I know that they had A reaction, just not a HUGE reaction. Like, 'hmm, it is strange he's covered in blood... Oh, well. Let's go get a look-see as the new Cleamsweep!

Well written

Ok, well I don't know how they knew who Harry was despite being the ones that determined his name since all they had was his blood which doesn't show what he looks like but I'm hoping he is about to inherit a vault that's been dormant for many years. Even if it doesn't make him filthy rich it'll hopefully at least let him get the things he needs.

Hmmm, wonder if maybe they recognize his magical signature because his blood carries it, too?

You should have him write to Gringotts to ask if he has a vault. The Peverell name goes way back so maybe there is a vault.

Mysterious that the goblins say he is Hadrian Peverell. I mean, I know that the Potter's trace back to the Peverells (in fan fiction stories at least) but the blood I.D. check done by the goblins should have said Harry Potter unless magic decided to change him just enough to change his lineage.

Dumbledore seems...odd, I guess. You would think he would have asked Harry a bunch more questions.

Please don't make Lily fall for Harry, that would be too weird, lol! :D

I just found this tonight. I’m enjoying very much! Thank you so much for sharing :) I hope you will be able to update often :D

Sorry, accidentally hit 'review'. Harry's going to be freaking out when he wakes up

Harry's going to be frea

As usual, Luna, you have left me craving more. I may have to resist reading for a full month juat to get in more than a single chapter lol. Are there any traces of Auburn left in Dumbledor's hair (as mentioned in chamber of secrets, during Riddle's time)? And Using the Peverell name, very clever. But shouldn't the blood teat have linked him to the Potter's as well?