This story hath been a.k.a.'d: When P.I.X.A.L. Gets Mad

What is it with Zane and half his face falling off?

This is so sad. this entire fic is heartbreaking...

go jay! teach zane... but let him teach you too

I can't—
I literally can't read this anymore. What.
I'm too angry and sad. It's too angsty. I can't do this right now. X"D

(But that's not really why I came, anyhow; I figured I might not be able to handle angst at the moment. I just wanted to make another comment after seeing your profile, but FF won't let me leave more than one comment per chapter on a story. Anyway: *clears throat* You're only 11 years old?! Tbh, when I read the other story [the one I left all the reviews/comments on] I was like, "oh, this is good but there are some grammar errors and stuff. kinda surprised considering the writing itself is so well done." But then I saw your profile and my respect for you increased DRASTICALLY. For your age, you're wayyyy better than most writers. Keep up the good work and you're going to be an AMAZING writer in a few years!)

i'm loving this story so far. I've read i lot of stories on here and this one is very unique. please continue to write this story. i will be excitedly waiting for more. thanks for making this. :)

Its nice to see another author noticing how little the ninja seem to care about Zane and its even better to see someone thinking about how the situation would be handled I enjoy and constantly re read this story because I absolutely love it and only wish updates would come as quick as I read them, please continue

Yay, you updated! I love this story!
I absolutely adore that Nya is steaming (heh) mad about the boys' treatment of Zane, and I also really like your explanation of why it hits close to home for her. It makes a lot of sense! I am curious, however, about the asterisk after "robotically." Was that a typo (there are a couple in this chapter, "hAnd" and "growle" mostly, sorry) or was there something you wanted to point out? I'd love to know the answer.

This is an interesting story. As a fan of sibling fluff, I really like this last chapter.

Poor Zane could really use a hug from his ninja brothers couldn't he

Hope there is more soon _

Oooh yes, you described him well. Poor Misako! Separated from her son for so many years... And finally finding him much more different than in her expectations. I wonder how Garmadon feels about this?

XDDD Pixal yelling about her "poor Nindroid"
I like Pixal's personality here. She varies from the waaay to calm one in the show.

Thanks for the update! By the way, how often do you update?

See uuuuuu!

Age doesn't matter when writing. I love how you write... This chapter made a beautiful description and comparison of feelings and elements. ... Wait, why am I talking like this?

...Yeah. Things have been hard on me lately. Um, no. I've been hard on myself lately. I put too much pressure on myself. Made me think about someone in this story. XP

Keep it up! By the way, if you didn't say it, I,would never have guessed it was rushed. You have talent, yanno?

Oh wow. I really, really think that this story is great. After all what I read (and I read a darn lot of stories), almost no one attended to Zane's emotions like this. And to make it a story between Pixal and him.

I wanted to review for the first chapter, but I couldn't wait to read the second. My apologies XP

Please stop saying that your story is bad when it absolutely is not. It puts all the feelings straight in the story, shows what kind of love Zane and Pixal shares, what is bad in there?

Snif. Such concern for Zane. Pixal is one of my favorite characters now, thanks to you.

See you for now!

YOOOOO MISAKO I LOVE HER (AND I ALSO LOVE THIS STORY AND ALL YOUR LITTLE INSIGHTS)

Don't worry, we all get lazy. Take me, for example, I'm a master procrastinator!
Hmmm, I can totally see it, when you put it like that.
Ah! What happened!?

Jay, what a cutie.