This was an awesome fic. Thank you so much for writingsharing it with us!

Holy crap! Totally wasn’t expecting that revelation!

Firstly, it's not often I like neal. And I can say I certainly wish my kids dad was more like how he is in this story.

And its a fantastic story. I worked out the killer quite quickly but I couldn't put my finger on the motive. Do many twists and turns which kept me hooked.

I loved that there was I real drama between Emma a dog killian. That for once they just found their feet a different feelings with with each other without things going wrong every few seconds.

Great story.

That was such a great story, both for the suspense and the love story!

What a lovely conclusion to a very interesting and different Captain Swan story. The story is worth so many more reviews, and I am sorry I just kept reading when I had time. I had missed reading it as you posted the chapters.

This was very different in the terrible tragedy of the Jones family. There were so many surprises and unexpected characters and interactions i had to continue reading. Even though we knew the guilty person a few chapters back there were still several twists. I thought Emma and Killian were very good. They tried to keep their distance, Emma certainly tried, but there was a connection they couldn't ignore.

I was thrilled to see Liam, happy in life, and I was thrilled when he and Killian decided to move back to Storybrooke. MM was a good mom and a good friend, David a good cop. Belle was Belle, suspicious of her husband but unwilling to do anything until she had to. Regina as a lawyer seemed like a good fit for her. Neal was very good too. I appreciated that he wasn't the bad guy and he wasn't rotten to Emma. Their relationship and love of Henry was a very positive aspect to the story.

The happy ending, the children and grandchildren and vows in this final chapter were wonderful. Thanks for the glimpse into their future happiness. We were glad to see it, they deserve it. Thanks for this story, I am going to see what else you have written.

That was wanderfull story, one of my favorite! Ending is so good, i enjoyed every chapter! Can't wait your next story.

Brilliant ending. I had tears in my eyes.

This is one of my favorite stories. Soooo good! The characters, the storyline, it's wonderful.

Eek! I love this version of Killian and Emma. So damn hot... plus the storyline itself is brilliant. Looking forward to am update.

Yeey, update! Love your story, its soo good! I hope Emma will be ok...

I honestly love this so much! It’s literally my favorite thing to read! It’s so good I cannot wait to see what happens next! Your amazing great job!

I just caught up on the entire story and it is so good! I’m looking forward to your next update! Will we be getting a CS baby in the fic? They’re so adorable together! Love the plot! Love the mystery! Love it all!

Babies are big responsibilities but Killian and Emma can handle it. Killian needs to meet Henry... loved the way Killian and Emma's relationship had gradually progress into something beautiful.

Poor Killian, quite the twist. Great chapter

OMG, talking about messes, this is getting better and better.